Comments | cedef: [S1.24]

cityatsea in cedef

[S1.24]

Mar 13, 2008 03:37

24. INSTINCT

( open heart surgery )

Comments 31

midnightdiddle March 13 2008, 12:57:22 UTC

<3

nnghk. Oh, god. I love you long time right now. And like, have to run to my next class, but. omg. I love you, and will ramble my love at you tonight. nnghk. <3

cityatsea March 13 2008, 16:43:09 UTC

♥!

midnightdiddle March 13 2008, 18:42:32 UTC

♥! Back, and still incoherent. But there is tons of love for you. And I kept thinking of this on the way to and from class. <3 I really like Dino's detached away of thinking about how to kill people, and his reactions, and. a;skldfj Just. Love. <3

cityatsea March 13 2008, 20:35:38 UTC

now that it's not, like, 4 AM, it all reads pretty horribly OOC to me; i make everything so detached and depressing. XD;;;

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dame_batsie March 13 2008, 13:04:25 UTC

This is great. The artful implications and the depth of Dino's character make this a good read.

cityatsea March 13 2008, 16:43:31 UTC

thank you; i'm glad you enjoyed it.

sinistera March 13 2008, 15:04:57 UTC

ILU ILU. *AAAAAAAAAAAA* POST MORE DAMNIT.

I love how you literally dig a hole into Dino and give him depth. LOVE. *AAAAAAAA*

Also, I love how cedef is basically DINOIFED.

cityatsea March 13 2008, 16:44:37 UTC

TELL THE GRAD STUDENTS TO STOP WORKING ME INTO THE GROUND; I GOT HOME AT 10 PM LAST NIGHT AND THOUGHT - OH, I'M EARLY, I SHOULD WRITE. orz

♥ i love dino like a fat kid loves cake, man.

sinistera March 13 2008, 16:47:07 UTC

D: YOU ARE A GRAD STUDENT BITCH?

cityatsea March 13 2008, 16:51:06 UTC

i am everybody's bitch. :< ♥

picnicbird March 13 2008, 15:11:39 UTC

And here I thought I was the only one who knew who Bono was, let alone put him in fic -- and besides that, I love your writing style. Lucid, and yet -- very crystalline. :) It's so easy and yet rewarding to read.

cityatsea March 13 2008, 16:45:37 UTC

ahaha whenever i read/write about bono, i imagine the U2 frontman, and oh man, the amusement will never cease. :) :)

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

bobojaj March 13 2008, 16:08:08 UTC

Fantastic. I love seeing pre!series Dino, and this is an incredibly well written study. So perfectly Dino. I especially love the disconnect when describing seeing his mother and father dead. Just an altogether lovely job.

cityatsea March 13 2008, 16:46:35 UTC

thank you! we aren't really given many details about dino's past, just the end results, and it's always fun to speculate.