fic: Revelation

[ceeebee]

Title: Revelation
Rating: G
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: And now here they were, with Merlin clutching the mantelpiece and Arthur clutching the chair, and the dancing flames refusing to reflect in either of their eyes, which were usually so bright and blue.
“Please,” Merlin whispered, one more time, his face the very image of desperation, and of

Comments

[ceeebee]

wow! Thank you so much. I've said I love the way you phrase things, right? Because I'm going to cling to 'quietly intense' for the rest of the day :')

I'm really glad you enjoyed it- it felt good to get a bit of a longer fic finished :) Also, it's Arthur's reactions that I'm always most worried about when writing revealed, so hfgskd yeah, thank you :)

[owensheart]

This was so agonising and yet so beautiful too. grat work.

[ceeebee]

aw, thank you- I'm glad you liked it :)

Lovely

[elbereth_lvae]

I absolutly loved this, it was brilliant! And the summary was... catching, to say the least! The way you described their emotions, the trouble, the love...! I'm floored, really!

Re: Lovely

[ceeebee]

djhfsdk thank you :D I'm glad the summary caught your attention :)

[archaeologist_d]

I loved the emotion of it, how intense and personal it was. Loved the way Merlin was so afraid of what Arthur would do.

Great job.

[ceeebee]

heee, all I know is that I'd be terrified in Merlin's position :O thank you so much for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[mangacat201]

oh how direly, direly we need that!

[ceeebee]

haha! If anything that Merthur-y happened in the actual show, I would probably faint xD Thank you for commenting :)