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ceiphiedknight

LJ Idol :: Week Eleven :: Open Topic

Jan 20, 2012 19:50

Large brown eyes, shadowed by a curtain of chestnut hair, gazed out from behind the walls of the local tavern ( Read more... )

lj idol, fiction

Comments 25

jacq22 January 21 2012, 08:29:01 UTC

A change in pace and style, and it made a good story, well done.

ceiphiedknight January 22 2012, 02:18:10 UTC

Thank you!

imafarmgirl January 21 2012, 16:24:49 UTC

That ending was definitely a surprise.

ceiphiedknight January 22 2012, 02:17:57 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad!

basric January 21 2012, 23:23:29 UTC

A nice surprise twist at the end. Nicely done.

ceiphiedknight January 22 2012, 02:17:32 UTC

Thank you!

whipchick January 22 2012, 01:32:18 UTC

How interesting that it switches protagonists at the end - What a surprise!

ceiphiedknight January 22 2012, 02:17:08 UTC

Thank you! There is more to the story that explains everything...but for the purposes of the contest I thought I might feel it out and see what people think!

vaguelyclear January 22 2012, 22:34:26 UTC

Ooh, interesting! I'd love to know more about this world.

ceiphiedknight January 23 2012, 00:54:36 UTC

Thank you! I can only take credit for the characters, they exist in the world created by a good friend of mine who is about to publish his tabletop roleplaying game! I was asked to work on a story for a future publication, but I'm lazy, so this is what I've now come up with for Idol. I do enjoy a good swords & sorcery epic, though. :3 Hopefully if I get good responses here and maybe some critiques, I can improve and let it become the full story it is meant to be someday. There is definitely more in store for Longon and S'lanna!