Fic: Backstabbed - Ianto/Jack - PG13 - Torchwood

Apr 13, 2008 00:10

Title: Backstabbed ( Read more... )

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pinkfairy727 April 13 2008, 14:11:36 UTC
Do you mind if I pretened that this happened, seeing as the evil people at the BBC didn't show us this scene?!

p.s. LOVE IT!!!!!!

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celebrian_lotr April 14 2008, 05:19:35 UTC
Oh, not at all, please do pretend it did happen! :-D

It actually makes my day, or night ;) Heh

PS: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

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rojodiablo April 13 2008, 14:41:52 UTC
Absolutely delightful, exactly how I would have envisioned it, had I given my brain time to go there. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

My internal teacher is yelling at me, just a minor thing:
"but that you -as person- are better than"
Should there be an 'a' in there? Gah, sorry!

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celebrian_lotr April 14 2008, 05:29:14 UTC
Aw, thank you for commenting. I am glad you enjoyed it :)

And, I fixed it. I didn`t want your internet teacher to feel frustrated about that ;)

Thanks for pointing it out!

Both Beta and myself missed that one. We were like, Hmmm, I totally miss that. Yeah, me too and I read it lots of times... LOL

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missthingsplace April 13 2008, 16:32:16 UTC
I really loved that :)

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celebrian_lotr April 14 2008, 05:29:53 UTC
I am glad you liked it!

Thank you for commenting :)

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strifechaos April 13 2008, 18:39:56 UTC
Jack's stern reprimanding Ianto was done brilliantly, very sound agreements on each side and I love how you approached both of their perspectives on the manner.

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celebrian_lotr April 14 2008, 05:33:55 UTC
Thank you :)

I thought, this was something they needed to talk about. Because, I do not think Jack would have taken it lightly.

I am guessing they are both very permissive with each other’s actions, but sometimes you need your special other (in this case also co-worker) to see your POV.

Jack couldn`t hold this one back.

Thank you for commenting!

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celebrian_lotr April 14 2008, 05:36:11 UTC
AW *blushes* Thank you :)

It is always nice to know I got their voices right!

One is always a bit insecure when writing characters people likes so much.

Thank you for commenting.

And the Fantastic, just made my day. Now I`m thinking in The Doctor heh *squee* <3 9

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