Jack's stern reprimanding Ianto was done brilliantly, very sound agreements on each side and I love how you approached both of their perspectives on the manner.
I thought, this was something they needed to talk about. Because, I do not think Jack would have taken it lightly.
I am guessing they are both very permissive with each other’s actions, but sometimes you need your special other (in this case also co-worker) to see your POV.
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p.s. LOVE IT!!!!!!
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It actually makes my day, or night ;) Heh
PS: Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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My internal teacher is yelling at me, just a minor thing:
"but that you -as person- are better than"
Should there be an 'a' in there? Gah, sorry!
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And, I fixed it. I didn`t want your internet teacher to feel frustrated about that ;)
Thanks for pointing it out!
Both Beta and myself missed that one. We were like, Hmmm, I totally miss that. Yeah, me too and I read it lots of times... LOL
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Thank you for commenting :)
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I thought, this was something they needed to talk about. Because, I do not think Jack would have taken it lightly.
I am guessing they are both very permissive with each other’s actions, but sometimes you need your special other (in this case also co-worker) to see your POV.
Jack couldn`t hold this one back.
Thank you for commenting!
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It is always nice to know I got their voices right!
One is always a bit insecure when writing characters people likes so much.
Thank you for commenting.
And the Fantastic, just made my day. Now I`m thinking in The Doctor heh *squee* <3 9
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