Fic: Jack´s secret - Ianto/Jack - R/NC17 - Torchwood - Part: 3/6 + Epilogue

[celebrian_lotr]

Title: Jack’s secret

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[seether_79]

Great! can't wait for more :)

[celebrian_lotr]

I´m glad you´re enjoying the story :)

Thank you for commenting!

[itoshii_chan]

*intrigued*

WOW!! I'm so glad to be following this fic! The build-up is making me twitch, but I think I'll manage for five more chapters... a bit painfully!

*LOL*

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! ^^

[celebrian_lotr]

Aw, hopefully it´ll be worth the wait! :)

Next Chapter, next Sunday/ Monday. This one got delayed a bit because I am covered in RL work :(

Thanks for the feedback!

[lulahtalks2much]

The only maybe 'slightly' negative thing I would say is - the cybermen and daleks aren't in Rose's universe, they went into the empty timeless space inbetween. Other than that, enjoying this! Post more and quickly!!

[celebrian_lotr]

You know, I was thinking exactly THAT just when I was re-reading this part for like the third time to upload it!

Grrrr, hate to get facts wrong. I am usually very careful with them. Double Grrr for missing that one.

I am pretty sure there were Cybermen left at Pete´s world though. I mean, is not all that likely they ´all´ made it to the one the Doctor managed to win the Canary Wharf battle... Right?

But even so, Daleks wouldn´t have made it there. *sighs*

I´m glad you liked the chapter, other from that not so little Ooops *blushes*

Thank you for commenting, and more will be up next Sunday/ Monday ;)

[tanarian]

Hmm, we have no proof that there are no Daleks in Rose's new home. Yes, the Doctor shoved the Canary Wharf ones into the void, but there's no saying that there aren't another version lurking just around the corner in the alternate dimension.

And these Cybermen are ones that were created by Lumic. The original Cybermen were an alien race so, again, they could still exist. And given the programming the Lumic Cybermen had, if only one survived they would try and resurrect the entire sorry mess. So I think you should cut yourself some slack. Just because new Who has sort of forgotten the original Cybermen doesn't mean that we have to!

Loving this, by the way!

[celebrian_lotr]

We have no proof no, and if they are in one universe, they are most likely in Rose´s too, thing is they weren´t there when THe Doctor sent her back.

Plus Daleks are sneaky; they always manage to survive no matter what! So there are ought to be some around that universe too.

I think the Cybermen created by Lumic are most likely around Pete´s universe, because I do not think ALL Cybermen crossed universes for the sake of invasion, some would have to stay behind to try ´upgrading´ humans again, whenever they had their chance...

And I was thinking of something before, if Lisa, who was half converted wasn’t pulled into the void, then it means Ianto was hiding her somewhere after pulling her out the conversion units, so- any Cybermen that could have being I don´t know, in a basement in TW1 might have needed to be exterminated in some other way?

I´m curious as to the old Who Cybermen now! I only know Lumic´s.

Thank you :) Glad you´re enjoying it!

[christine_twfan]

This is a fantastic next chapter. I love how you've written the Doctor. I could hear him saying all this in my head. Excellent. :)

[celebrian_lotr]

Aw thank you. And really?! I’m so unsure when writing the Doctor LOL

I am a little more confident writing Jack now, after writing this story, but the Doctor. I really don’t think I make him justice!

So is extra nice to hear you could hear him, makes my morning :)

Thank you for commenting!

[vipersweb]

another lovely chapter. i like this conversation between Jack and the Doctor.

[celebrian_lotr]

Thank you :)

I was a bit worried about writing the Doctor, but I´m glad you liked it!

Thanks for commenting!