Following The Light: A Tale Of Two Kings: Chapter 2

[celefinwe]

Title: Following The Light: A Tale Of Two Kings: Chapter 2
Author: celefinwe
Pairing: Peter/Caspian
Rating: (PG-13) Battle and blood alert. Not for the faint hearted.
Word Count: 1506 words
Summary: In times of darkness, one must follow the light to find what they are looking for. On the battlefield, sometimes you can win more than just the war.
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[celefinwe]

Thank you so much ^_^

I really wanted to capture the thoughts and feelings in the middle of a battle. I'm glad you liked it

[celefinwe]

Did I mention I really like your icon? LOL

[clever_tongues]

Yay, second chapter! I loved the battle excitement and intensity here. Especially Peter's thoughts punctuated with the countdown, or vice-versa. And him fighting the boy his age. I just watched the movie (again :P) yesterday so it's still pretty vivid in my head, and this fits perfectly.

Amazing job! I'm still kicking myself for not volunteering to beta this -- if you ever need someone I'd love to work with you. :D

[celefinwe]

Awwww, hon. Absolutely! If I need someone to beta beta another story, you'll be tops on my list ^_^

Can I tell you a secret? I took down notes while watching the movie to make sure the story was as accurate as possible *wink*

[clever_tongues]

Awesome, ty! <3

Taking notes is never a bad idea ;) Especially when they include such hotness.