KH fic

[cellophaneroses]

Well, it's crap (as always), but it was worth a shot. x3;

Title: Timebomb
Rating: G, PG?
Word Count: 1,613
Pairing: mostly Sora/Kairi with Riku/Kairi, but you could probably extract some Sora/Riku out of it. >_@
Notes: this is my first KH fic, so if it’s a little (or very) out of character, please bear with me. ^^;;; Idea mooched off of demons_silver, many

Comments

[poftd]

First, might want to add the warning: character death up there. And mention what love triangle. And take off the bad writing warning, cause then no one will read it.

Second.... IT MADE ME CRY. ;______; Like, sob my eyes out cry. It's all your fault I say! ;^;

Bambi reference and I caught it! Yeah baby!

[cellophaneroses]

Oh, k. Didn't think about that. xD;;;

I'm... sorry? o.o;

xD YaY, er, whatever-it's-called-to-reference-to-other-thingers-ing! x3;

[poftd]

Don't be. It means you write good. Cause isn't the point of writing to express yourself and be able to bring the reader into the scenario and make them feel sad, happy, amused, whatever?

But it might also be because I've been reading sad things all day, and I'm super sensitive right now. ;^; ARG, Furuba! Arg I say!

[cellophaneroses]

Which is why I phrased it as a question. ^^;; Actually, if I manage to squeeze emotion out of readers, then I know my work is done. =)

Oh, right, and thank you kindly. -^^-

[demons_silver]

YAY!!!! ANGST!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

I <3-ed it!!!! ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST!!!! WH00T!!!!

Soooooo HAPPY!!!!! *claps*

[cellophaneroses]

xD

Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you liked it, then. -^^-

[demons_silver]

Can't believe you actually wrote it! FWEEEEE!!!!!

Your story just perked me up for the day! ^ ^

Angsty angstness is so kewt. YAY!!!

[lost_spacecase]

Wow. That was really good. I've never read Kingdom Hearts fic before but I have to say, yours definitely made me want to read more. :)

[cellophaneroses]

Thank you. ^^ Ever played Kingdom Hearts?

[lost_spacecase]

Yes. I'm more than a little pissed at that game. I'm stuck. I can't stand being stuck in video games because I'm generally really good so I went on a 'break.' Which still isn't over.

[cellophaneroses]

Where are you stuck?

[kio_kasuke]

T_T That was so sad!! B-but...I really enjoyed reading it! I could really see the images playing in my head, even though I've never played the game! XD; But, yeah, it was really really really really really GOOD and I'd love it if you wrote more often! ♥ Through the whole thing, I was like, literally on the edge of my swivel chair, getting watery-eyed. XD

This deserves one big standing ovation. ♥

[cellophaneroses]

Oh, why thank you. ^^ You're making me blush. *attempts to blush* *um...not working 0.o*

Anyways, I should warn for spoilers, huh. x3;;

[kio_kasuke]

Maybe one day when I have drawing talent/skills I'll draw fanart of this. *w*

OR BETTER YET...Maybe one day, if you would allow me to, I'd make a doujinshi out of it. *lightbulb above head lights* XD And then I'd sell it at like Fanime or AX or something and give you like ALL THE PROFITS. ♥♥

[cellophaneroses]

xDDD Hey, you can go ahead if you'd like. x3 But if you sell anything, then it ought be 50%-50%. *nods wisely*