Comments | celtic_flicka: Cuffs (Veronica/Logan) NC-17

celtic_flicka

Cuffs (Veronica/Logan) NC-17

Apr 22, 2009 07:25

Title: Cuffs
Pairing/Character: Veronica/Logan
Word Count: ~2,500
Rating: NC-17, for the lovin'

Summary: Is Veronica really willing to trust Logan? She needs to prove it to him...
Spoilers: Season 3, but nothing too specific
Disclaimer: If Rob Thomas lets me borrow them, they will be returned in their current pristine condition.

Note: This was written ( Read more... )

veronica, logan/veronica, logan, vm fic, veronica mars

Comments 26

oz_black_cat April 23 2009, 11:05:14 UTC

“Because you’ve been a very bad boy, Logan Echolls, and I think there’s a punishment in your future.”

I find myself saying this to him all the time ;-)

hot hot hot, but yeah i was soo offended I read it twice. Excellent work.

celtic_flicka April 23 2009, 12:52:36 UTC

i was soo offended I read it twice

Hee hee. Thanks! :)

jjazz59 April 23 2009, 14:06:59 UTC

I love this. Kinky but not too much. Good job!!

celtic_flicka April 23 2009, 18:00:04 UTC

Thanks! I didn't think I could go as far as some of the people who wrote for the meme (although I did enjoy reading what they wrote!), so I'm glad this still worked. :)

princessbella24 April 23 2009, 16:54:44 UTC

This was seriously hot. I liked that when Veronica saw him take his shirt off, she licked her lips; that shows you that V is so one of us!
Most of all i loved that Veronica told him that she loved him, and then they proceded to have rough kinky sex. As it should have been on the show:P
Great work:

celtic_flicka April 23 2009, 18:00:59 UTC

As it should have been on the show:P

Maybe if the show were on HBO or Showtime. :) Thanks for commenting--I'm glad you liked it!

medjunkie April 24 2009, 09:40:35 UTC

I liked this one, a bit of kink, but not so that it's out of character. I think playing around with cuffs is pretty mainstream bondage, and this made it more believable. Nice to see V approach Logan for a change too.

celtic_flicka April 24 2009, 13:20:49 UTC

Thanks! I didn't think Veronica was the type to make the leap into more hard-core stuff. Yet. ;)

BRILLIANT! galaxy451 April 28 2009, 01:25:25 UTC

You'd absolutely no need to have felt nervous about posting this... it was wonderful! Hot and sexy, and loving and trusting, all at the same time! I was just waiting for the moment when Logan was going to lose the key though... lol ... and Veronica was going to have to suffer the embarrassment of being freed from the cuffs with bolt cutters by the sheriff.

Loved the way it turned out in the end though... the handcuffs live to see another day!

Re: BRILLIANT! celtic_flicka April 28 2009, 03:17:56 UTC

I think Logan would have taken the chair apart before he'd let anyone else see her like that!

I was a little nervous since Veronica clearly has good reasons for her control issues where sex is involved, so I didn't want it to be...icky. So I'm glad you liked it!

seluciav April 28 2009, 16:17:06 UTC

OMG! First of all, I'm sorry it's taken me an eternity to post any kind of feedback for this -- I read it the day you posted it but was so swamped at work that I didn't have a chance to do anything about it. :-(

That having been said: THIS WAS MADE OF AWESOME!!! Yes, it was smutty but it was the GOOD kind of smut. It was hot, it was sexy, it was fun and even a little bit romantic. It wasn't OOC and actually spoke to some of their deepest relationship issues while allowing them to work through them and bond in a way they hadn't been able to. How brilliant is that? It takes a really good writer to manage all of that in one fic. :-)

You did good hon -- REALLY, EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD!!!

celtic_flicka April 28 2009, 20:26:29 UTC

Thanks! I was leery about V seeming out of character because she can be so controlling (and for good reason, where sex is concerned)--I was hoping I could make it believable that she'd go for that! I'm glad it worked for you.