Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: The Moment of Epiphany, Part 2/2 (Veronica, Logan, Duncan, Wallace, and others) NC-17

celtic_flicka

VM Fic: The Moment of Epiphany, Part 2/2 (Veronica, Logan, Duncan, Wallace, and others) NC-17

Apr 25, 2009 15:51

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( Logan was sitting on the foot of his bed, his head in his hands. )

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celtic_flicka April 26 2009, 13:49:18 UTC

Well, of course 40-something Logan would still be hot! :)

calm_fruitstand April 26 2009, 05:30:42 UTC

Love this! I'm totally on the same page with the Duncan hate. I couldn't stand that part of Season 2. She was way smarter than that!

celtic_flicka April 26 2009, 13:51:05 UTC

Yeah, it bugged me so much that Duncan was treated as though he was perfect, when he committed a lot of sins that were, in my opinion, much more serious than Logan's. They were held to completely different standards. Grr. Wallace was always more observant than V realized, so he needed to set her straight on Duncan!

jujubee April 26 2009, 05:54:15 UTC

Elizabeth and Will? Pride and Prejudice, of course. ;)

This is so much better than how Veronica actually responded in the show. The first half of season 2 was nearly as bad as the second half of season 3. Loved this!

celtic_flicka April 26 2009, 13:53:29 UTC

Elizabeth and Will? Pride and Prejudice, of course. ;)

Of course! :)

I always hated that the writers seemed to want us to think Duncan was this paragon of virtue, when his lying and avoidance is a much bigger deal than Logan's vandalism, in my opinion. Or maybe I just hate Duncan.

p2880 April 26 2009, 06:04:25 UTC

Loved the fic. I was really surprised when you jumped into the future--but it makes this fic that much better! LOL that Logan tells his daughter LV waited for sex until married!

celtic_flicka April 26 2009, 13:54:39 UTC

Thanks! If Logan was that protective of Veronica, can you imagine how bad he'd be with a daughter?

myblognstuff April 26 2009, 08:50:44 UTC

I really enjoyed this story! It irked me that they didn't show Logan's reaction to the bus crash that day. Especially when Logan confronted Duncan and Veronica before getting on the bus... what did he say.. "I'll miss you...*smirk*..." That was almost a DUN DUN DUNNNN moment. It's almost as if they were trying to hint that he was going to do something bad... or blame him for the crash. Right?

But anyways.. such a sweet story :)

celtic_flicka April 26 2009, 13:57:00 UTC

Yeah, I think Logan's comment as they got on the bus was supposed to be a red herring or something, but it just came off as odd. I think maybe he was just trying to make Veronica uncomfortable, or hide the fact that he was upset at seeing D&V together (as we all were--heh).

Maybe that's why we didn't see his reaction, but it did seem like a glaring omission.