VM Fic: By the Light of a Broken Lamp (Veronica/Logan) R

[celtic_flicka]

Title: By the Light of a Broken Lamp

Pairing/Character: Veronica/Logan

Word Count: ~2,350

Rating: light R (some language, sexual situations)

Summary: Can Veronica make Logan listen to reason? An AU/continuation of the breakup flashback in 2x01 (Normal is the Watchword)…

Spoilers: Season 1 & 2

Disclaimer: If Rob Thomas lets me borrow them, they will be

Comments

[zaftig_darling]

I can't even begin to describe how happy this makes me!

[celtic_flicka]

Thanks! :)

[scarlett2u]

At last, the truth comes out! Soooo much than the canon version of events. I knew when I saw your name as author that this would be good...and good is an understatment. Enjoyed it all. Thanks! (I needed this; it's been a hard, long day.)

[celtic_flicka]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. It sounds like everyone needed a fic pick-me-up this week (including me).

[darlingsaila]

You have no idea how much I wish this is how it would have gone down. Excellent job on this, darling, because I honestly felt like this was canon. It really should have gone like this. I especially liked how you compared this Logan to post-Lilly Logan, that was a nice touch.

Also, Keith catching them was totally hysterical. I loved it.

[celtic_flicka]

Thank you! (Love your icon.)

I originally planned to leave Keith out of the scene completely, but as I was writing, I decided it would be funnier if he just came in a little later. :)

[love_is_epic]

Yes! *fist pump* This is really awesome! I'm thinking that this is definitely one of my favorites of yours : ) This is exactly how it should have went on the show. We would have all been a lot happier.

“I’m not leaving,” Logan said, putting his hand over hers. “I can’t let this end with you thinking I would ever do that to you again.”

^ I don't know why, but out of everything, this line particularly got to me. It broke my heart in more ways that one. So, that's a great job of writing!

I love that Keith came in and caught them making out. It's a nice ending to have them be in trouble for normal teenage things for once.

Awesome writing! Thanks for this! : )

[celtic_flicka]

Thanks! It was an idea that was rattling around in my brain for a while--having Keith interrupt didn't seem like a good enough ending for me. I didn't think either V or L would just leave it at that.

[celtic_flicka]

Oh yeah, if I came home to my daughter's boyfriend yelling like that, I'd throw him up against the wall too! But if he hadn't done that, I wanted to explore how things would have continued.

Thanks for your comments!