Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: I Hear the Bells (Veronica, Keith, Logan) PG-13

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VM Fic: I Hear the Bells (Veronica, Keith, Logan) PG-13

Dec 22, 2009 23:29

Title: I Hear the Bells ( Read more... )

veronica, logan, keith, fic, vm fic, veronica mars

Comments 45

onceuponapillow December 23 2009, 07:22:58 UTC

Awww! That put a big smile on my face. I loved it. Veronica & Logan's awkwardness with each other was cute and I loved the Veronica/Keith interaction.

V's note and Logan going back to the bed was especially lovely.

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 16:00:36 UTC

Thanks! I worried that the note would be too corny, but then I decided it needed to be short and simple.

oz_black_cat December 23 2009, 07:29:25 UTC

Aww, this was so sweet :) I love the image of them kissing whilst she's wearing a Christmas hat. It's made me feel very festive.

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 15:59:55 UTC

I liked that for all her cynicism, Veronica was a big dork about Christmas. :)

glasheen25 December 23 2009, 09:25:59 UTC

This is so sweet! Loved the Veronica Keith banter but even more loved when Keith told Veronica he hoped he hadn't fucked her up after everything that had happened.
Thanks for writing! What a lovely Christmas fic:)

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 16:02:13 UTC

Thank you! I always thought the Keith-Logan relationship was handled weirdly on the show. As a father and a lawman, I think Keith would have been a lot more sympathetic to Logan, even when he and Veronica were fighting. And he certainly would have felt guilty for not seeing what was going on between Logan and his dad.

But that's what fic is for, right? ;)

maipigen December 23 2009, 11:45:16 UTC

This was really well, is it a one shot or are you going to continue with it? It's really good and I think you caught the tone between characters really well.
i like that all of the cast so to speak are gathered around V's home at Christmas. Nice;)
And the end was wonderful, what a difference it would have done if she'd just done that in the show, eh?

Happy future writing
ditte mai

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 16:03:54 UTC

This was probably just a one-shot (although I've said that before and been wrong...).

Thanks so much for your nice comments!

isdon_isgood9 December 23 2009, 12:04:49 UTC

Ohhh that's sweet and really that's all I've got but it's my own fault for checking my emails at 11 at night. So all I've got is that, that was sweet and I give it 2 thumbs up. There would probably be a fan girl sqee in there somewhere if I wasn't fighting sleep.

celtic_flicka December 23 2009, 16:04:45 UTC

Heh--I've made that mistake before too. Just about to turn off the computer, and a fic notification pops up. It's always a tough choice, and sleep usually loses. :)