Comments | celtic_flicka: FNL fic: Now We Know (Smash, Tim, Matt, Landry) PG

celtic_flicka

FNL fic: Now We Know (Smash, Tim, Matt, Landry) PG

Jan 28, 2010 14:09

Title: Now We Know ( Read more... )

Comments 9

afrocurl January 28 2010, 21:15:34 UTC

Aww, J, you're going to make me cry from this!

But really, that's wonderful--from Smash's memories to those boys in the car just having some time to themselves.

celtic_flicka January 28 2010, 23:29:43 UTC

I love the boys just hanging out together. I'm glad you liked it!

hope27 January 28 2010, 22:22:37 UTC

Wow!!! This was amazing is more ways than one! I love how you wrote the boys humor and included little backstories for each of them with Smash. These boys will always be connected, they went through a lot together and came out of it stronger.

I think my favorite part was Landry giving Smash the poem because it's PERFECT for him. FNL is amazing at developing these characters into people you feel like you know and giving them dimensions and feelings. You described their relationships to a T!!!

I love it! Thank you so much! And you should definately write more FNL fic! Definately memming this so I can re-read many times!!! :)

celtic_flicka January 28 2010, 23:28:58 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! Sorry again that it took me so long. :P

a_h_c January 29 2010, 03:45:32 UTC

This was really nice. I think you did a nice job of extrapolating the relationships between the guys. I don't see a lot of fic from Smash's perspective and I liked it.

celtic_flicka January 29 2010, 14:27:20 UTC

Yeah, I've only read a few Smash fics too, so that was part of why I wrote this from his POV. Glad you enjoyed it!

fleurlb January 30 2010, 11:35:48 UTC

I think I love this more each time I read it. Really great job and I hope this is the first of many (ok, at least several....or even a few) FNL fics from you. :)

And I'll beta for you anytime. It's barely any work at all with your super-clean copy. :)

celtic_flicka January 30 2010, 13:44:49 UTC

(Love your Grandma icon!)

At the very least, I'm definitely writing that Tinker fic I told you about. It's going to be a short little piece, but I can't resist!

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celtic_flicka January 31 2010, 21:51:02 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you said that, because I was most concerned about getting the voices right. The voices on this show are so distinctive, you've gotta make them sound like themselves! (Landry is especially hard for me, because he always uses way more words than he needs.)