Comments | celtic_flicka: Leverage Fic: The Apple, Chapter 4/4: Family (Eliot, Aimee, team, OFCs) R

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Leverage Fic: The Apple, Chapter 4/4: Family (Eliot, Aimee, team, OFCs) R

Sep 11, 2010 14:20

Title: The Apple, Chapter Four: Family
Characters: Eliot, Aimee, team, OFCs
Word Count: ~3,100
Rating: R (cursing, violence)
Summary: The kidnappers had no idea who they were dealing with…
Spoilers: For “The Two-Horse Job” (1x3).
Disclaimer: I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of Leverage. Wish I were.
Notes: This is the 4th ( Read more... )

leverage, the apple, nate, hardison, eliot, parker, sophie, fic

Comments 10

hollymac_79 September 11 2010, 20:33:25 UTC

Loved this chapter. Looking forward to the Epilogue!

celtic_flicka September 11 2010, 22:47:25 UTC

Thank you!

meghan_84 September 11 2010, 21:47:27 UTC

really simple and yet it worked! I like it!

celtic_flicka September 11 2010, 22:47:05 UTC

I thought of the different bad guys that I could use as the kidnappers, and I decided that since this story is about Eliot learning to be a parent, it made sense to have the kidnapping be something that could have happened to any family, not just Eliot Spencer the Hitter.

Thanks for commenting!

meghan_84 September 11 2010, 23:05:28 UTC

Yeah, that makes sense after you finish this maybe you could read mine? I know you tend to stay aay from kidfic but you are the only other writer I know who's written Eliot as a parent and I'd love to hear your opinion of my verse!

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celtic_flicka September 12 2010, 21:39:16 UTC

Thanks!

zaftig_darling September 12 2010, 13:00:48 UTC

Adorable. I loved all the conversation over the comms. I love that Parker wants to play on the monkey bars. :-P

celtic_flicka September 12 2010, 21:47:04 UTC

Can't you just see her hanging out there and teaching all the kids to do crazy-dangerous stunts?

deaniebtvs September 13 2010, 05:02:29 UTC

Aw... cute. I love Spencer -- she totally rocks! And she's so daddy's girl.

I like that they were the most inept kidnappers ever. And I loved the interaction between Eliot and the team. Even from thousands of miles away, they're supporting him. I can't wait for the epilogue -- I want to see the Leverage family reunited, though I shudder to think of the kinds of crazy stuff Parker, Hardison, and Sophie teach Spencer (Nate seems too sensible to teach her crazy stuff).

celtic_flicka September 13 2010, 13:50:52 UTC

Nate's definitely too sensible, and Sophie might be too. I'm thinking that Hardison would just want someone to play video games with, but Parker? Yeah, she'll teach her crazy stuff. I keep thinking of that scene in The Wedding Job when she needs to entertain the client's daughter for about 5 minutes and ends up teaching her to pick a lock. :)