you think you know, but you have no idea

Feb 12, 2006 04:27

The world called to them, set them up as martyrs for a cause that we all forgot. We sang and breathed the life of which they dreamed: a silver screen nightmare that tore under the wishes we placed upon them. And now the fools cat-call like they know the truth, like they've seen the light. But a lie is a lie and a sigh is still a sigh. So you think ( Read more... )

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gazeatthesoul February 12 2006, 05:35:06 UTC
Oh my god I love this post.

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celticsilver February 12 2006, 13:46:25 UTC
i have minimal recollection of making it, but thank you.

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gazeatthesoul February 14 2006, 02:51:24 UTC
Not joking at all, it reads like spoken word, I had to read it over a few times just because I love it. And I don't think I've ever added someone else's post to my memories before. Still, dang.

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like_achilles February 12 2006, 14:27:06 UTC
I've meant to say this before, but your use of words is absolutely riveting. There's no artifice, it's just bare muscle and sinew. It stuns me.

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celticsilver February 12 2006, 16:12:37 UTC
I'm not sure why I have a habit of drinking enough to kill a small horse before posting on livejournal and falling asleep on the sofa, but I'm glad it comes to some good. Thank you.

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avriisme February 12 2006, 14:56:22 UTC
This is lovely. And I shouldn't say that because you're obviously not writing about a nice subject, but you've done it in such a beautiful way. I agree with Rhian above - it's riveting.

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celticsilver February 12 2006, 16:14:58 UTC
Thank you, although I am very much indebted here to my good friend Sierra Tequila.

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kodak_moment February 12 2006, 20:51:09 UTC
That last paragraph..How did you do that? God, ouch. This was fucking amazing.

xxx

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celticsilver February 14 2006, 02:35:14 UTC
Cheers! That last paragraph mainly comes from my trying to write lyrics to a friend's song in the pub the other day. I think that's what we were trying to get at, in a roundabout way xx

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New journal. alderluce February 12 2006, 21:07:30 UTC
Hi Danica, it's Luce - pippins_babies. Started a new journal, needed to de-clog, and wanted to keep you added. I know I don't comment much but I read all. Hope this is okay.

If all the above can be attributed to tequila, spend your life drunk and make a fortune writing poetry :).

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Re: New journal. celticsilver February 14 2006, 02:35:47 UTC
Hello! I'll add you right back xx

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