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Mar 19, 2012 23:45

et tu, Brute?

The Fourth Myth of the CreationThe war between the Amarillians and the Polarites had been going on for one hundred and forty two galactic years before the Fourth Creation occurred. If you’re curious - and I have no doubt that you are, for curiosity is the bane of all creatures - the feud began as a direct result of some questionably ( Read more... )

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halfshellvenus March 20 2012, 17:28:53 UTC
I'm really enjoying this series-- lots of unexpected created myths arising here, and they're all so different!

The sadness of the Polarite soldier comes through very clearly here, both as the mystery woman fails to return to the bar and again at the end of the story.

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karmasoup March 20 2012, 18:28:02 UTC
A greek-worthy tragedy ...a fantastic example of love lost, needless carnage, and the wistfulness of what might have been. One of your best.

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michikatinski March 21 2012, 00:34:22 UTC
You have such wonderful phrasing, like savoring mediocrity and curiosity being the bane of all creatures. <3

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basric March 21 2012, 16:23:20 UTC
I always enjoy reading these in this series.

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cheshire23 March 22 2012, 03:43:37 UTC
"The porcelain gods" mid-myth was great for the mood-lightener on something otherwise lovely and dark. I enjoyed this.

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