Seeing the Light, Chapter 26/26 (part one of three - whoops!)

Feb 28, 2010 09:52


Seeing the Light, Chapter 26/26 (part one of three). Chapter 24 part one (includes links to previous chapters), part two , Chapter 25 part one part two
Pairing: This part - Jason/Mark, Robbie/Gary, Howard/Gary. 
Rating: NC-17. 
Words (this part): 3000.
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Sci-Fi. Top Gear crossover.
Summary: Simon is going to be crowned King of ( Read more... )

mark/jason, gary/robbie, fic, gary/howard, take that fic

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awkbyname February 28 2010, 14:48:09 UTC
Oh Richard,‘angel boy’ may have willingly rolled over but what good did all that fighting back do you? You're in just as bad a place, if not worse ( ... )

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cenea February 28 2010, 17:19:58 UTC
Much better thanks - and thank you for you lovely, lovely comment :D

Yeah, Mark/Cowell is a complex one...I think your analogy with the toys as a kid is a good one. Part of him does...well, maybe not 'love' Mark, but certainly feel some sort of affection for him...I think it was different with Richard though, because of the way he fought back. That was just the 'challenge' of breaking him, although I think, almost, the challenge was just as great with Mark. Interesting. In a slightly sick way...haha, so in the way I like ;)

Haha, honest, there was a reason Howard had the spanner - it was in the box Jason nicked, and then Howard took it out to repair the printing press...erm, honest!!

EWT really has been amazing hasn't she!! I haven't even totted up the total, but it was definitely more than the 100,000 - eeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!

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sunshine_2525 February 28 2010, 17:12:09 UTC
Brilliant update!

Ooh, Gary and Robbie are free! And Howard had James' spanner! Ha ha, how did that happen?!

I'm really worried about Mark. He really seems to breaking apart now :( Him and Simon - what a complex "relationship" that is.

I'm going away on holiday early Thirsday morning, so I guess I won't be able to read the ending of this fic until I get back. What a torture that will be, but I'm sure it will be well worth the wait *g*

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cenea February 28 2010, 17:26:27 UTC
Aw, thank you so much :D

Yeah, Mark's in a bit of a mess - and I'm afraid I've had too much fun making that relationship complex. I'm kind of tempted to write more backstory, and more Mark/Robbie backstory...but I really have to finish this for now, I think ;)

Oh, haha, the spanner thing - there was a reason behind that, honest. It was in the box Jason stole from Cowell, and then Howard took it out to mend the printing press, so it wasn't just coincidence. Honest ;)

Aw, we'll miss you! I was going to post the end of your cabin boy prompt this week too, so maybe both will be waiting when you get back :) Thanks so much for reading :D

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sunshine_2525 February 28 2010, 18:54:07 UTC
If you ever get the time to do it, more backstory would be great ;)

"Oh, haha, the spanner thing - there was a reason behind that, honest. It was in the box Jason stole from Cowell, and then Howard took it out to mend the printing press, so it wasn't just coincidence. Honest ;)"

Really?! Ha ha, that was very clever. I'm very impressed *g*

Aw, thanks :) So there will be lots of lovely catching up for me to do then :D

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cenea February 28 2010, 20:58:23 UTC
I do intend to write some soon...maybe a little break first, though :D

Heh, thanks. Not sure it was that clever...but I try ;)

Oh, and I hope you have a lovely, lovely time on your hols :)

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anniina85 March 1 2010, 09:07:10 UTC
Things really are heating up now! And everyone has their own part to play in the process of saving the day. Very exciting!

Poor Mark, being stuck with Cowell and at the same time having to fear that the crowd will eventually kill him... at the end I really started to get concerned about his mental health, it was excellent the way you portrayed his inner struggle ;) How long can he possible take this anymore?!? I love how there is so many levels in the relationship between Cowell and Mark, it's very interesting...and totally wrong in so many ways ;) Can't blame Howard for being a bit terrified of facing Mark once again after all those years. I'm really soooooo excited for the reunion!

It seems the boys are one step closer to getting home, yay!

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cenea March 1 2010, 16:06:46 UTC
Aw, Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I'm glad that the excitement is building a bit... I hope the next bit delivers!!

Yeah, I've got to admit, it's been far too interesting thinking about mark in this story. As we were chatting about before, the things he's been through cannot just be solved with a hug... There's definitely going to be a massive inner struggle going on before he can face any sort of new life. So, yes, the reunion is going to be interesting... I hope!

As, of course, will be their journey home... ;)

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mrs_barlow March 3 2010, 14:32:55 UTC
any chance for part 2 today? please!!!

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cenea March 3 2010, 18:48:26 UTC
Aw,

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cenea March 3 2010, 18:50:28 UTC
Ooop, most of that comments seem to get lost! Sorry :( Anyway, as I was saying, I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to post today, but I promise it will be done tomorrow. I never had the chance to do the final changes... But I would leave the boy is in limbo for much longer, because that would be cruel ;)

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mrs_barlow March 3 2010, 19:32:55 UTC
aaaah, ok, was just wondering... i think i'll catch it a bit late if you post tom. cos it's another one of my long days... *sigh*

I must learn to be more patient!

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cenea March 4 2010, 16:55:22 UTC
Yay!! Thanks sooooooooo much for reading...haha, and your simon/mark love is not creepy at all...might just be thinking about writing a few missing scenes there one day soon ;)

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