Hourglass

[ceramiclifestyl]

Out late on a night to forget

Comments

[ingrained]

i want to know, why you don't submit to phoenix.

[ceramiclifestyl]

I've submitted two old ones so people wouldnt recognize them, and I think one got in.
Maybe I'll submit newer/better ones....

[ingrained]

I would vote this shit in, mane! You should definitely submit, too much stuff is really shitty.

[sonnidays]

I like how you went in and out of rhyme scheme.

I can never tire of your writing... It's always just beyond my reach of understanding, that's what I love about it.

[cold_hard_b]

hi daddy. when are you taking me to the park? mom beats me and talks in her sleep, it's weird. I got her to sing the beatles today, muahahaha

indeed.

[ceramiclifestyl]

haha
someday, someday