[Veta] Alone with Two Killers (Bay Area, 2007)

[cerdd_til_asura]

Well. That was unexpected

Comments

[diary_invidia]

I really enjoy reading the egregoroi analytical detachment. It's kind of like almost not believing it's real or really happening. That sort of level of separation.

[cerdd_til_asura]

Thank you for the commentary and the compliment; I do think that was kinda where I was going with the whole thing, a sort of disconnect from reality. I don't really know where Veta's voice is going to go and how it's going to show itself - feedback is welcome here. :-)

[ratontheroad]

Wow... I have to thank you for that story, you nailed Anthony, and it was wonderful to read. Thank you.