fic: city of blinding lights, 2/2

[ceridweyn_lin]

continued from here

Comments

[oflights]

this is WONDERFUL. there are so many little quotes and passages that I adore, and I want to quote them here but I'm super tired. I will come back, though! just wanted you to know that I thought this was excellent.

also, you have a bit of broken code in the second part (and missing end italics tag that made a huge chunk of text italic). just FYI!

[mariekebrelle]

What a great roadtrip story! Your Mark POV is fantastic, and I loved his observations of driving through Northern California. The way you tied together Mark and Eduardo's shared memories of watching the sunrise was so lovely and poignant, too. Thanks so much for sharing! Looking forward to cuddling up with this fic and rereading it a lot in the future. :)

[the_beanster]

I loved this! Mark's voice here is spot on and I love how you use only texts to show the progression of his and Eduardo's relationship.

[julesmind]

“I was gonna stop in Kansas, but then I thought I would never get out of Kansas so I kept driving. Did you know how much of Kansas there is? I guess it makes sense that Dorothy wanted to go to Oz.”

^^^ I spilled tea all over my laptop after reading this.

Glorious story, great Mark POV fic, really.

Thanks for sharing :)

[sandrine]

This is wonderful! I love everything about it, but particularly the way you write Mark. ♥