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ceruleandust

and the crimson rain continues (to fall)

Aug 25, 2011 22:16

Title: and the crimson rain continues (to fall)
Series: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: Dino/Hibari
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: Disturbing imagery, stream-of-consciousness, angst.
Summary: And he falls.

( but the arms are there, always, warm and suffocating. )

pairing: d18, character: hibari kyouya, series: katekyo hitman reborn

Comments 6

azurecerulean August 26 2011, 00:53:44 UTC

T_T Beautiful imagery, btw *sob*

celen August 26 2011, 12:13:58 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you think so. ♥

ceasefire August 26 2011, 02:21:15 UTC

Ahh, it's much easier to read like this ♥ And it's still just as haunting and sad.

celen August 28 2011, 17:17:19 UTC

/is very late at answering this

I'm glad to hear that! I tried to make it less confusing, so I'm happy it worked. And aww thank you sweetie. >//< (...but now that I think of it, it is surprisingly hard to write a happy fic/drabble from Hibari's POV. Damn you, Hibari, stop being so depressing.)

♥!

dragon5174 August 28 2011, 17:04:12 UTC

Very intense and I think a pretty accurate way that someone with Hibari's personality would feel when faced with feelings of affection. Well done.

celen August 28 2011, 17:18:38 UTC

I'm happy to hear that, since I find Hibari to be an incredibly difficult character to write, so it's great I could capture at least something of him that seems realistic.

Thank you! :>