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ceruleandust

if your destiny is a miracle, please stay

Sep 12, 2011 01:14

Title: if your destiny is a miracle, please stay
Series: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Characters: Gokudera Hayato
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: And he's no longer running.

A/N: A belated birthday fic for Gokkun. ♥

( and he wants it, even though he has no idea what it is )

character: gokudera hayato, series: katekyo hitman reborn

Comments 8

azurecerulean September 12 2011, 13:24:10 UTC

Hmm, you must have enormous patient to write in such a style. I need to learn from you. (It seems that my narrations are too rushed in general, except the smutty parts *running from embarrassment*).

celen September 12 2011, 13:36:01 UTC

...uh, actually, I wrote that in something like twenty minutes. XD For me, writing in that style is the most natural way to write.

But the problem with a style like mine is that it's incredibly difficult to write long fics like that. So don't worry, while each style has different strengths, the weak points are different, too. :> And hey, practice always helps. So don't give up and just keep writing!

azurecerulean September 12 2011, 16:27:37 UTC

20 minutes?! OMG I can't even finish a paragraph that's more than 3 sentences long with that amount of time... You must have a helluva typing speed then. XD

celen September 12 2011, 16:30:03 UTC

Haha, I write by hand, then when the fic or drabble is finished, I type it. :D So, it took me 20 minutes to write it by hand, and then some five minutes to type it. Or something. I didn't exactly time it. XD

reidluver September 13 2011, 03:22:03 UTC

This is beautiful! You did such an amazing job with such a short little drabble. I admire your ability because I always need a ton of words to say what I want. A great birthday gift to poor Gokkun!

celen September 13 2011, 17:54:40 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. ♥ I'm so bad with answering to comments as I never know what to say, but thank you, honestly, so much. It made me so happy to hear that.

And really, it seems to be the opposite with me - I'd like to be able to write longer fics with more content, but all I can write are short drabbles. orz

amusinglydead September 14 2011, 00:07:23 UTC

Holy crap this is beautiful and so, so, Gokudera. Love the way you wrote this <3 It was perfect.

celen September 14 2011, 11:43:54 UTC

akdjskdj ;A;! I'm so happy that you liked the drabble, since I wasn't entirely certain if I managed to keep it IC, so it's a relief to hear it was okay.

Thank you so, so much. ♥