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ceruleandust

seven steps away from death

Oct 14, 2011 00:20

Title: seven steps away from death
Series: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Characters/Pairings: Tsuna, Reborn, the Guardians. Guest appearances by other characters.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Blood, some implications of violence.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: On a sunny Wednesday afternoon, Tsuna gets shot. His Guardians retaliate.

( It was supposed to be a completely normal Wednesday afternoon. )

character: lambo, character: reborn, character: sasagawa ryohei, character: gokudera hayato, character: chrome dokuro, character: hibari kyouya, series: katekyo hitman reborn, character: yamamoto takeshi, character: sawada tsunayoshi, pairing: gen

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celen October 14 2011, 20:39:52 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I tried my best to keep their reactions in-character, I hope I was even somewhat successful. :>

fithablink October 14 2011, 05:41:32 UTC

awwwwwwwww. that was so canon and totally happening in the future.
short and sweet, just my cake <3

celen October 14 2011, 20:40:49 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words! ♥

I'm glad I managed to keep it canon-like, as that was my aim. You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear you think that! :>

ceasefire October 14 2011, 07:31:07 UTC

Aaaah, this is so so so so good ;_; I think Hibari and Lambo's sections were my favourites, though.

celen October 14 2011, 20:43:37 UTC

Aww, thank you so much, sweetie. ♥ Coming from you, that means so much for me.

You have no idea how I struggled with some of the POVs, especially Lambo's, so I'm so so glad I didn't completely botch it up! I'm also glad you approve of Hibari's POV, as I'm always so uncertain when writing him. >_>

I was also pretty worried that my shipping tendencies would show through, even though I tried my best to make it as gen as possible. But they're there, if you know where to look. XD

Anyway, thank you so much for your kind words, it makes me so happy to know you like this. /hugs

hieronymousb October 15 2011, 15:49:31 UTC

Wonderful. I'm adding it to my memories. I have such a soft spot for future!fic which is happiness-affirming.

celen October 15 2011, 22:52:02 UTC

Thank you so, so much! You have no idea how happy this comment made me. ♥ I'm so glad you liked this; I really love future!fics, too, and it's such a relief to know I didn't completely botch it up and that it had the sort-of happy atmosphere and showed the bonds within the Family, despite the rather grim set-up.

Again, thank you so much for commenting!

acenpokerface October 16 2011, 08:39:09 UTC

really cool! haha, the guys who ried to kill tsuna had pretty good tactics - even if they were STUPID. i mean, attacking the vongola? they've got to be out of their minds. anyway, lovely story - it's very well-written, and i enjoyed it immensely.

fave line: "If it were any other person lying there, Ryohei is pretty sure he’d be jumping on the walls, despairing over what would then be an impossible task. But, he thinks, this is Sawada, who is the strongest person Ryohei has ever met, so he simply calls Garyuu out and lets his flames light up the room, to the extreme."

i do love ryohei. :)

celen October 16 2011, 17:17:50 UTC

Thank you for commenting! Yeah, they'd have to be suicidal, but hey, some people just never learn. And again, thank you so much, it makes me incredibly happy to hear you liked it. :>

Haha, Ryohei is wonderful, I admit that. And I'm glad you liked him in the fic, I had never written him before and wasn't completely certain of the characterization. So it's definitely a relief to know it wasn't a complete disaster.