Comments | cesario: fic: with her own wings

cesario

fic: with her own wings

Oct 23, 2007 14:40

with her own wings
by Branwyn

fandom: Doctor Who
pairing: Ten and Martha, Ten/Martha if you squint.
rating: PG
spoilers: 3x13
notes: This started off as crack and ended up as something dangerously close to schmoop.

summary: Martha was once the Doctor's maid. Now the Doctor seems to be Martha's secretary.

( In about thirty seconds I'm going to call the phone company and tell them my sister's mobile has been stolen. )

fic, doctor who

Comments 61

persiflage_1 October 23 2007, 19:08:27 UTC

Tee Hee ! Love it ESPECIALLY his speech to Vicky - but how typical that he's telling the important stuff to the WRONG girl !!

One small point though - you've got "fourth call" twice - the second one needs to be fifth...

cesario October 23 2007, 21:21:48 UTC

It is rather typical, isn't it? And thanks for the correction, it's been fixed. :)

persiflage_1 October 24 2007, 04:51:45 UTC

Yes, very Ten...

yahtzee63 October 23 2007, 19:16:45 UTC

The speech to Vicky is magnificent -- nicely done!

cesario October 23 2007, 21:23:09 UTC

Thanks!

in_the_end October 23 2007, 19:18:52 UTC

Oh, that was just lovely.

Great stuff.

cesario October 23 2007, 21:23:18 UTC

thank you!

seularen October 23 2007, 19:20:39 UTC

Brilliant! His speech to Vicky is so Ten, and I love Martha wanting to help the revolution. And the last line! Absolutely fantastic.

Is it too much to ask for a sequel?

cesario October 23 2007, 21:23:45 UTC

A sequel! Hmm. I haven't been inspired for one, but I'll keep an open mind. :)

Martha Jones, did you say you want a revolution? aberrantcliche October 23 2007, 19:22:14 UTC

He just hung up on Tom!

I love his speech to Vicky. He really needs to apologize to Martha.

Martha sounds spot on. I can really hear her voice through your fic.

I really enjoyed reading this!

Re: Martha Jones, did you say you want a revolution? cesario October 23 2007, 21:24:11 UTC

He totally hung up on Tom. Tom's lucky the Doctor didn't go and alter his timeline so he'd never been born.