Comments | cesario: fic: with her own wings

cesario

fic: with her own wings

Oct 23, 2007 14:40

with her own wings
by Branwyn

fandom: Doctor Who
pairing: Ten and Martha, Ten/Martha if you squint.
rating: PG
spoilers: 3x13
notes: This started off as crack and ended up as something dangerously close to schmoop.

summary: Martha was once the Doctor's maid. Now the Doctor seems to be Martha's secretary.

( In about thirty seconds I'm going to call the phone company and tell them my sister's mobile has been stolen. )

fic, doctor who

Comments 61

bana05 October 23 2007, 21:49:25 UTC

Oh, that was glorious. THIS NEEDS TO HAPPEN ON THE TEEVEEE!1!!

Excellent work! I actually like Francine's exchange as well as Vicky's. I think you capture her voice very well.

cesario October 23 2007, 23:54:36 UTC

Thank you! I'm quite new to Martha's voice, so I'm glad it rings true to you.

elliptic_eye October 24 2007, 00:15:49 UTC

I LOVE YOU. Seriously, I have walked the internets for a year trying to find and/or encourage someone cleverer than I to write a fic that would give me an explanation for Martha's Judoon compensation slip. And, of course, this is just a really beautifully written bit of fluffy fluffness.

"Martha Jones," he says, hands deep in his pockets. "Did you say you want a revolution?"

Excellent clincher, at once very much the Doctor and very much Martha. *breaks out of the icon of fluff and yay*

cesario October 24 2007, 00:24:12 UTC

I just saw season three this week, and on watching Smith and Jones today for the third time I only just noticed the compensation thing---or rather, only just noticed that it was never explained later in the season. At that point I had almost all the story written but was looking for an ending, and then---there it was!

significantowl October 24 2007, 00:16:43 UTC

that was a thousand bits of awesome. <3

cesario October 24 2007, 00:24:42 UTC

:-D Thank you!

voicelikehoney October 24 2007, 01:03:47 UTC

Oh, this is so being memoried. You have their voices down so well (and I pretty much went YAY! along with the Doctor when it finally was Martha on the other end of the phone!

Love it.

cesario October 24 2007, 20:48:55 UTC

Awesome. :) Thanks so much.

mojitochica October 24 2007, 01:24:11 UTC

You had me rolling at Francine calling the Doctor out about not asking after Martha then making him jealous about the new man in Martha's life and then when he hung up on Tom!

You know every week I swear I'm giving up fanfic and Who in general, but every week someone sucks me back in. This week it's you, so this means I expect you to suck me back in every week from now on by writing awesome fics! Just joking - well kinda. Seriously write more fics!

cesario October 24 2007, 20:49:08 UTC

You honor me :-)