Hold

Sep 11, 2007 01:00

 Title: Hold
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Word Count: 300
Characters: Crew
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: Precedes Bank because I like to write out of order it seems...As always 
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ever_obsessed September 18 2007, 20:46:00 UTC
*feels like a bitch for being so late*

*hangs head and kicks feet*

I am so so sorry.

I have this insane urge to tilt my head and cross my arms and look at Mal like he's an idiot - because, um, yeah, clearly?

This is all his fault, which Inara will remember until they're both old and gray and still snarking at one another even though they can't even hear one another. And after they get the hell out of dodge and are sure everybody's fine, she's ST go off on him in a really great way, I know it - because true love means bitching at one another, you know?

True love means understanding why you bitch at one another.

I'm a bit twitchy at the moment, too much caffeine, so I hope all this makes sense.

“Would ya get that winch workin’ for chrissakes!”I think one of my favorite things about your work is your ability to show Jayne's growth as a member of Mal's crew without letting him lose what makes him Jayne. Dyce did it well, and you kick ass at it, and it's such a difficult thing to do. He's such an extremely independent character, not ( ... )

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ceslas September 19 2007, 03:03:16 UTC
am so so sorry.

Now cut that out!!! You are wonderful and amazing for all the truly insightful comments you have blessed me with, so no apologies, dong ma?

True love means understanding why you bitch at one another.

Truer wprds were never writen! And I haven't even filled in the whole arc they have been having while I have focused on Jayne and River... hmm...

He's such an extremely independent character, not just physically but emotionally (with the exception of Ma Cobb) so it's an extremely tricky thing to do

He is, and it has been quite the trip through the shoals to try and keep that unique "Jayne'ness" true. I am gratified it comes through.

Jayne will hold Zoë until grace wins over nature’s fury.”
Nobody pulls off double meanings like River! ♥

She is wonderful that way isn't she! It wasn't until I read that line about the tenth time that I *face-palmed* as I realized the multiplicity of meanings there. ...grace wins over nature's fury... may well be one of my favorite snippets of dialog I have had the fortune to pen. * ( ... )

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