[Fic] Rain Closed Eyelids (5/?)

[ceylon_miko]

Title: Rain Closed Eyelids
Pairing: RyoJin, RyoUchi, Akame, TomaPi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, romance, au
Summary: The night Jin came into Ryo’s life, it was raining.  Ryo never thought he would need him.
A/N: We now have the first appearance of Kame!  I’ve been so worried about writing Jin and Kame as teens.  Those are complicated ages to write.  We

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[akeru_world69]

wowowow!!
they made out!!yay!!
but ryo has to think before talk ne?
and you showed parts of the akame's past...
i want to know more!!
and yasu is in tokyo?? is he a good friend and is worried about ryo? or is there something more?
thanks for the upload!
chuu~

[ceylon_miko]

Look forward to more awkward teen!Akame moments later. Wow you picked on the Shota thing. I'll explain it more in the next chapter, but since you did pick up on it I'll spill some.

In this au Ryo has known Shota the longest out of his K8 friends, and the two used to date in their early teens. (Which explains why Ryo is the closest to him.) Shota and Ryo are just friends now. (plus Shota has been dating Ohkura on and off for years)

Thanks for the comment. ^^

[akeru_world69]

ahhh... that's why. well, then it's pretty normal for him to come and see Ryo... and i don't know why but i have the feeling that something will happen eith this visit...

[ceylon_miko]

Well Jin still has no idea what happened with Ryo in Osaka. Shota's visit is a "get more insight" device for not only Jin but for the readers as well. (since I've been hiding everyone's background >>)

[dunealia]

First of all YAY! update!

It hit me just before I started reading that there was no sign of Kame anywhere even though this is a RyoJin fic and then it seems it was Kame that Jin 'killed'. What really happened? What's gonna happen when Shota shows up on Ryo's doorstep and what is Jin gonna think? :O

So intriguing!

[ceylon_miko]

There is always small mentions of Kame here and there but this is the first time he has shown up in person. Flashbacks are going to be worked into the chapters since Kame can't really be in the present unlike Uchi who will show up later. *hint hint*

As always, Thank you for your wonderful comments. ^o^

[dorayaki_chan]

what a nice cliffy you got over there girl , wonder what's gonna happen next^_^ i hope i won't have to wait for too long.

[ceylon_miko]

On average (not counting the gap between ch1 & ch2 ^^;;) it takes about 1-2 months for new chapters. (but don't hold me to that <<;)

Thank you for the comment.

[mm_nani]

OH this is progressing nicely...I like the randomly appearing flashbacks a lot! :D

And I was wondering if your second fiction was having another baby but you had ALREADY POSTED chapter 5!

I had no idea since you didn't put it up on jent's!

Btw I loved the little Tomapi action in the previous part!

[ceylon_miko]

Oh I did put it up jent. You may have missed it. (Chapter 4 was posted 9/11) I'm glad you liked my Tomapi. ^^ Thank you for the comment.

[mm_nani]

WHAT?

HOW PREPOSTEROUS!

I AM SUCH A DILIGENT STALKER OF JENT'S!

T___T

[zvemi]

yay, an update :) really enjoying this fic

[ceylon_miko]

Thank you for the comment. ^^