Wow. That was an even longer wait, wasn't it? Ugh I HATE school! And being sick. There was that, too. Freaking stomach flu. Ick. Anyway, here you go! Finally! For anyone who wants to kill me for anything from this point in, please just hang in there...I promise there's a point to everything. Okidoki then...enjoy! LOL and please do review so I know
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Have I told you that you've got Rory's mannerisms and voice down so well? I could totally *hear* her freaking out when she woke up next to Logan, and then freaking out about it when she was talking to Lorelai about it. That whole scene where she was looking for Lorelai and started crying reminded me so much of The Incredible Shrinking Lorelais. Ha, I could really see Luke being awkward with Rory crying on his shoulder, and I love how Dean just took over and how much better Rory felt. I'm so glad that they're at least going to try the friendship thing again. :) You do Dean/Rory so well.
Ooh, wasn't expecting her to run into Jess there. It's nice that he at least apologized to her and they're keeping things amiable. Though you know which couple I'm rooting for. ;)
Awesome job with this chapter! I can't wait to read more (but feel better first! :)).
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But I'm babbling. :P Thanks so much I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! *more hugs* I love Rory and Dean, but we knew that... ;)
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Though, ugh, Jess. Your Jess is well written but I can't help my gut reaction to him!
Now I'm very curious to where all this leads...
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LOL like I said, no offense on the Jess stuff. I probably would have left him out completely if I wasn't such an OCD much-cover-all-bases detail freak. That, and I'm a writer, so the turn his character took in the last couple of epsiodes he was in in season six 'did' give me a little bit of liking for him. Before that I felt exactly as you do. :P
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