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Fic: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget (9/20)

Apr 28, 2015 21:08

Title: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget
Author: cgkm2099z
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: S5
Rating: R
Warning Language, Naughty Behavior
Word Count: 7,231
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community, and its characters, are the creation of the great Dan Harmon. I think it's still owned by Sony Pictures Television, but after the hack, I'm not so ( Read more... )

jeff winger, community, jeff/annie, fanfiction, annie edison

Comments 12

loveobsessed999 April 29 2015, 04:43:52 UTC

Oh. My. Gosh. You're alive!!!!!

Anyways I loved this chapter. Especially Jeff and Annie's reactions to seeing each other. And Troy's talking to Jeff-- I want to see more of the trial soon, but I also want more Jeff and Annie kisses (speaking of which are they ever going to talk about that?) and just more in general please?

cgkm2099z April 29 2015, 14:17:18 UTC

Oh. My. Gosh. You're alive!!!!!

What prompted this? I've been commenting in the weekly episode discussions :)

more in general please?

Yes, milady

loveobsessed999 April 29 2015, 16:17:53 UTC

What prompted this? I've been commenting in the weekly episode discussions :)

You hadn't posted your fic recently, and since I follow it a lot I missed it/you. Also I don't really go on the ep discussions-- it's scary in there. o_0

Yes, milady

Why thank you, milord.

cgkm2099z April 29 2015, 19:31:18 UTC

You hadn't posted your fic recently, and since I follow it a lot I missed it/you.

It wasn't as long as my break before chapters 4 & 5, but it was longer than most of my other breaks. This was a longer chapter though, and I got tied up in a few places. It's funny, I thought chapter 8 would be the difficult one because that's when the trial would be. But here I am done with chapter 9 and I haven't even gotten there lol.

Also I don't really go on the ep discussions-- it's scary in there. o_0I get that. I liked the tone of the re-watch better. I think that's cuz everyone has had time to digest the episodes, and you already know where things go - up until the end of S5 anyway. These 'as you go' episodes can mess with people. Especially those that stay up until 3am to watch. It's sort of a raw reaction. Some people react pretty strongly to stuff. Plus, Dan Harmon must have majored in psychological torture with a focus on shippers when he was in college. The thing that really bothers me is the spoilers that get thrown in from interviews, ( ... )

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Not shower sex. :P cori_the_bloody April 29 2015, 16:59:10 UTC

But deliciously tension-building! They are two very attractive people, and they should smoosh their "great" bodies together. I really liked the call back to Debate 101 with the breast-BEST and the intercourse-DISCOURSE thing.

Enough with the sexy stuff, though. The emotional components of this chapter were so satisfying! I melted at Annie's "You're good enough for me." I love how they know just the perfect thing to say to each other sometimes. Such lovable idiots. All the parent details were great, too. You hit all the important notes perfectly. I am loving the way this story builds.

And now I have to wait like everyone else to keep reading. Lame. I am looking forward to more!

RE: Not shower sex. :P cgkm2099z April 29 2015, 19:59:14 UTC

So, I wrote Annie's little tub scene over the weekend, and I lol'ed when you mentioned shower sex yesterday. I wanted to say something about it, but figured I'd just let you read for yourself haha. Actually, my initial plan was for Annie to realize what she was doing and then snap out of it. But then I was like, you know what? No, let's have her go for it. (Which, btw, means it was tension releasing as far as Annie is concerned ;-) ) Sadly, Jeff was not afforded any such relief. Maybe Annie will have to help him with that. In the shower. Whaaaat?I'm glad you liked the emotional stuff. I actually got sad when I was writing it, both Annie and Jeff's parts. Luckily for me, my parents are nothing like Annie's mom or Jeff's dad. Also, is it wrong to love something you wrote? I don't know, I don't want to sound conceited or anything. But yeah, I loved the "You're good enough for me" line also. It seems like all his life Jeff has fought a battle with himself over whether he's good enough. He has this outward persona that's brash and cocky, ( ... )

jdp1979 April 29 2015, 20:13:59 UTC

Really loving the story so far, this had some great emotional beats. Keep it up!

;-)