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Fic: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget (12/20)

Jun 01, 2015 22:49

Title: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget
Author: cgkm2099z
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: 6.02
Rating: PG-13/R
Warning Language, Adult Themes
Word Count: 6,969
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community, and its characters, are the creation of the great Dan Harmon. I think it's still owned by Sony Pictures Television, but after the hack, I'm not so ( Read more... )

jeff winger, community, jeff/annie, fanfiction, annie edison

Comments 25

loveobsessed999 June 2 2015, 03:26:33 UTC

:D. This was adorable, and sweet. Um best parts were Annie tackling Jeff against the wall and their make out, and them cuddling at the bar where Annie feels him chuckle and Troy and Jeff cuddling and Jeff and Annie making out in the kitchen but :( that you stopped it right before it got really steamy.

SO GOOD. And the Troy and Abed stuff made me tear up a little.

This was so good as so worth the weight!!

loveobsessed999 June 2 2015, 03:27:46 UTC

Also I forgot to mention Troy serenading Jeff, that took the cake!!

cgkm2099z June 2 2015, 17:29:26 UTC

Thank you!!! I love how your highlights are basically a list of the points where Jeff and Annie get physical. ;-) Except for the one of Jeff cuddling Troy, but that was because he thought it was Annie haha. Sorry for the :( but it should be pretty obvious that we're headed in that direction lol.

I'm glad you liked Troy's little song though. At least there was something good that didn't involve J/A make-outs :P

And the Troy and Abed stuff made me tear up a little.

I wrote all that stuff last night, and when I got to the goodbyes, I started tearing up. And, no joke, was full on crying as I wrote Abed's note.

This was so good as so worth the weight!! I hope you realize that I'm spoiling you guys with this, haha. Most of the fics of this length that I've seen end up taking the author a month or more in between chapters. GWWD took over two years from start to finish (I'm really glad I didn't have to survive the wait for that one haha). But this pace seems to be working out for me. I was out of town the last two weekends though, so that ( ... )

loveobsessed999 June 2 2015, 18:32:27 UTC

[Thank you!!! I love how your highlights are basically a list of the points where Jeff and Annie get physical. ;-) Except for the one of Jeff cuddling Troy, but that was because he thought it was Annie haha. Sorry for the :( but it should be pretty obvious that we're headed in that direction lol ( ... )

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bethanyactually June 2 2015, 04:17:54 UTC

I'm just enjoying this story SO MUCH. I love how excited Troy was for Jeff and Annie, and Jeff's comment that maybe the last five years were a misdirect and really he's Mr. Romantic. And Troy's dream was hilarious, and Jeff's reaction to it!

cgkm2099z June 2 2015, 17:58:32 UTC

Thank you so much, as always!! I'm glad that you like it.

Jeff isn't going to magically become a new person overnight, but he's going to find that with the right person, all those things he never saw himself doing or didn't think he was capable of, come surprisingly easy.

I'm glad you liked the dream, Jeff is a big teddy bear haha.

wingman19 June 2 2015, 06:50:42 UTC

Great addition! Keep up the good work !! Nervous as hell for the finale but this def helped out. Thanks!

cgkm2099z June 2 2015, 18:01:21 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it! And thanks for helping push me to keep working on this. It was definitely therapeutic for me during the last week, since here I can actually control what happens haha.

I'm also super nervous about the finale. I won't get to watch it until tonight when I get home from work. It's going to be the most nervous I've ever been watching a TV show. Here's hoping Dan pleasantly surprises us!

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cgkm2099z June 4 2015, 23:40:27 UTC

Aww, thanks so much :-)

cori_the_bloody June 5 2015, 16:49:00 UTC

How I missed that you updated this, I have no idea. But it's brilliant as usual!

Abed's note/gifts were so precious. I think I'm going to cry now, excuse me.

Also, hey! Delaying sexy time for one more chapter: no fair. On the other hand, I really liked the morning-after Jeff scene with him panicking and snuggling Troy. Comedy gold, my friend.

Favorite line of the chapter: "This trip has been a lot of fun, but also… it hasn’t?"
I feel like it's the classic Troy joke to make, but I especially like this one.

The counter make-out was super hot. And the after-court onslaught of kisses was so adorable.

I hope we get to see Troy come home before the end of the story.
Excited for more! :)

cgkm2099z June 6 2015, 00:09:28 UTC

How I missed that you updated this, I have no idea.

Probably because I posted this the night before the season finale, and everything blew up after that haha. Plus there has been an explosion of fics since then, so it gets pushed down the line.

Abed's note/gifts were so precious. I think I'm going to cry now, excuse me.

As I mentioned above, I started crying when I wrote Abed's note. MY EMOTIONS!

Also, hey! Delaying sexy time for one more chapter: no fair.

13 is my lucky number. And will apparently be Jeff and Annie's too. I didn't plan that.

I really liked the morning-after Jeff scene with him panicking and snuggling Troy. Comedy gold, my friend.

That was actually one of the ideas I'd had for a long time and was just waiting to finally get to. And thanks!

Favorite line of the chapter: "This trip has been a lot of fun, but also… it hasn’t?"
I feel like it's the classic Troy joke to make, but I especially like this one.

Haha, thank you, I enjoyed that line as well.

The counter make-out was super hot. And the after-court ( ... )

cori_the_bloody June 7 2015, 12:43:55 UTC

Probably because I posted this the night before the season finale, and everything blew up after that haha. Plus there has been an explosion of fics since then, so it gets pushed down the line.

Truth. And what a season finale it was! Given all the ignoring of emotions that happened throughout the rest of the season, I found it a fairly satisfying resolution. But, of course, it was also hella painful. Very funny, Dan Harmon.

13 is my lucky number. And will apparently be Jeff and Annie's too. I didn't plan that.

Isn't it just great when things work out like that?

That was actually one of the ideas I'd had for a long time and was just waiting to finally get to. And thanks!

Ooh, I love nuggets like that, both as a writer and a reader. It's great to have an idea stewing for a while because once you write it, the moment really gets a chance to shine.

cgkm2099z June 11 2015, 17:01:37 UTC

And what a season finale it was! Given all the ignoring of emotions that happened throughout the rest of the season, I found it a fairly satisfying resolution. But, of course, it was also hella painful. Very funny, Dan Harmon.

Yeah, given where we were after the first 12 episodes, the final was about as good as we could have possibly hoped for. I mean, I suppose it will seem more rewarding for them to finally get together after enduring some heartache, than if everything had just been hunky-dory. But we've been through years of this stuff and I need to see it officially in canon! I suppose based on the finale, I'll have to start a new post-S6 fic after I finish this one -_-