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Fic: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget (14/20)

Sep 07, 2015 21:46

Title: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget
Author: cgkm2099z
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: 6.02
Rating: PG
Warning Darkness
Word Count: 6,508
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community, and its characters, are the creation of the great Dan Harmon. I think it's still owned by Sony Pictures Television, but after the hack, I'm not so sure. The title is ( Read more... )

jeff winger, community, jeff/annie, fanfiction, annie edison

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cgkm2099z September 11 2015, 20:45:48 UTC

So, first of all, thanks for making me cry. A lot.

You're welcome?

Also, 10 chapters ago I started reading this story! Whoop Whoop!

Did you read the first few chapters? They're all posted here on my LiveJournal page, if not.

The beginning was hilarious.

Why, thank you!

But let's talk about you being mean. You made me so worried! Jeff's behavior was so strange, and I kept wondering what was going on. Then the proposal, and I was like "Ohh, it all makes sense now!", and then I was like "No, Jeff! Bad! Way too early! You lovesick puppy! Now there's gonna be a huge drama, great!", and then I was like "Wait, when did he even have time to buy a ring?". And then I felt like Ashton Kutcher just stormed into my room and screamed :" You just got punk'd!" So thanks for that emotional roller coaster.So, um, I would say I'm sorry for this, except that what you described was sort of exactly what I was going for lol. So maybe an apology would be slightly disingenuous. :-) So how about this: I'm sorry for the way that I am, hahaha ( ... )

To Greendale!! cori_the_bloody September 17 2015, 00:49:50 UTC

It was fun reading about Jeff and Annie traveling together and I loved getting Troy in this story, but I'm excited to check in with the Greendale characters. And to get some J/A antics on campus!

So, yeah, the beginning of this was impossibly cute and preciously flirtatious. Are you going to revisit Jeff's ominous dream about Annie as the ACB.
I love panicked Annie. She's weirdly adorable. I also love that Jeff changed the plans without telling her and the implication of EVEN MORE SHOWER SEX!

lol @ at the bridge couple having the same names as our heroes. Nice misdirect, making Jeff all moody and weird and then tricking us into thinking it was because he was going to propose. Thank god he didn't. That would have been too soon, buddy.

I adore that Annie bought a tacky souvenir t-shirt.

The stuff at the end was intense but well done. Bring on the paintball!

RE: To Greendale!! cgkm2099z September 17 2015, 03:12:08 UTC

I'm excited to check in with the Greendale characters. And to get some J/A antics on campus!

As am I. This trip ended up lasting way longer (in terms of chapters) than I thought it would. But I'm happy with the way it turned out. I'll miss Troy, but it'll be good to have the other characters at my disposal again. It gets kinda tough working with just J/A for so long.

So, yeah, the beginning of this was impossibly cute and preciously flirtatious. Are you going to revisit Jeff's ominous dream about Annie as the ACB.

Thanks! And I haven't decided yet, haha.

I love panicked Annie. She's weirdly adorable.

She really is. This is owed completely to Alison :-)

the implication of EVEN MORE SHOWER SEX!And did you catch the end where Jeff wanted one more go, but Annie opted to join the mile high club instead? Remember when I said Jeff was being noble in your story by helping Annie relax? This is Annie being noble. Jeff is a nervous flyer. So she'll take his mind off it ( ... )