I'm a little out of it as of late. I don't really know what i'm doing. I... Yeah.. No one wants to hear it anyways. So, i'm going to go to sleep now I think. Or maybe i'm going to write some more
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In my opinion, I think you should just consider this piece to be microfiction... rather than a portion of something larger. I think it works very nicely standing alone. Nice job. I always have problems with conciseness.
Thank you. I don't really consider it anything more than what it is. I thought about the back story I wanted to put behind it. I decided it was better as is though. To leave to the imagination.
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In my opinion, I think you should just consider this piece to be microfiction... rather than a portion of something larger. I think it works very nicely standing alone. Nice job. I always have problems with conciseness.
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