Coming from a frustrated poet (me) I give you props, very few people know how to write real poetry. Try enriching your vocabulary a bit more, nice job nevertheless babe <33333
Where did you send your poem? I've been meaning to submit a nice piece of work I wrote sometime ago...I'll show it to you if you care to judge, I like to hear people's opinions.
First the horse... now the poem... even though I'm sure the poem was written before you created the blue-green yarned horse... but, I'm going with the way I experienced it...
You, my friend... are quite the artistic individual and you get mad props for that.
I really enjoyed the poem and the depth of it. I really love the little sentences in between each stanza and how you repeat and mix the different endings... it sounds really good.
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Where did you send your poem? I've been meaning to submit a nice piece of work I wrote sometime ago...I'll show it to you if you care to judge, I like to hear people's opinions.
;o) Miss ya!
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yeah send it babe!! i love poetry!
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Good job little buddy.
First the horse... now the poem... even though I'm sure the poem was written before you created the blue-green yarned horse... but, I'm going with the way I experienced it...
You, my friend... are quite the artistic individual and you get mad props for that.
I really enjoyed the poem and the depth of it. I really love the little sentences in between each stanza and how you repeat and mix the different endings... it sounds really good.
:D
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i have to also show you the self portrait i once drew of myself!! i'm pretty artistic around, but i don't show it much :)
i can't wait, i want everyone to know!!!!!
thnx victor, you're awesome!! thnx for the mad props.
=)
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I remember I used to write BOOKS , filled with poems and stuff
now -
I have a life =X
lol ,
No but its awesome that you're into writing .
congrats !!
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thnx?
lol yayy i'm happy!!
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it's my poem and it's far from you being the sun!!
lol so stop rubbing it in yo!!
:-*
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