Ficathon Entry - The Visit

[chadini]

Title:  The Visit
Author:  Chadini
Rating:  T, for a little bad language.
Pairing:  GSR and a little Brass thrown in for good measure.
Spoilers: Season 9.
Summary:  Sara meets Natalie again.
Words:  1,420
AN:  Thanks to princessklutz04 for the beta skills.  The prompt for this story was the trio of pancakes, strawberry banana smoothie and beef stew.  I

Comments

[lizwontcry]

Ooh, I love Sara confronts Natalie stories. I wrote one very smiliar myself, where Natalie is singing her little creepy song. :) Natalie is just so interesting to write about, she has so many facets to her strange and creepy personality. Nicely done, thanks for sharing it with us.

[chadini]

Thanks...I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope we actually get to see Sara confront Natalie again.

[sidle77]

Nicely done. I love my mini fics.

[chadini]

Thanks for reading. It was actually pretty fun to write. I love Sara and Brass, I think he would be such a dad to her.

[nofrontiers100]

Ooh, very nice. Very believable too - Natalie still singing that creepy song. It's almost a mirror of a story to Grissom's interrogation of Natalie in Living Doll.

[chadini]

OMG! CLEVELAND! Sorry...thanks. I'm glad that you liked it. I picture that damn creepy song on autorepeat in her head.

[nofrontiers100]

LOL It's okay. I love your Browns/Drew Carey icon. *Sigh* I miss living there.

[emptyeyes1]

Wow! Quite powerful and written so well. I loved how you had Brass fatherly and protective of Sara- nice for the girl without a dad and a dad without a daughter (Ellie doesn't talk to him).

[chadini]

Thanks so much. I'm glad I was able to get the Brass/Sara relationship across. I love them together. Thanks for taking the time to review.