Why is he here?

Nov 11, 2008 16:09

Title:  Why is he here?
Author:  Chadini
Rating:  T, for a little bad language.
Pairing:  None.
Spoilers: Season 9.
Summary:  Lady Heather wonders why Grissom has returned.
Words:  370
AN:  Thanks to jungle_mag  for the beta.

Why is he here? )

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moonshinefaerie November 11 2008, 22:28:08 UTC
*sighs.* Nicely done. I needed to read that.

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chadini November 11 2008, 22:30:16 UTC
Thanks. I felt like I just couldn't ignore it.

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moonshinefaerie November 11 2008, 23:20:25 UTC
I really appreciated someone else's view -- other than my own -- as far as this goes.

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til November 11 2008, 22:29:48 UTC
You captured LH's vulnerable side very well. Well done :) Thanks for sharing

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chadini November 11 2008, 22:31:04 UTC
Thanks. I have never written from her point of view, but I found it interesting.

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jungle_mag November 11 2008, 22:30:33 UTC
mmm nom nom, I love this fic so much I could eat it....

...with popcorn flavoring, of course :D

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chadini November 11 2008, 22:32:15 UTC
OMG. Your icon is amazing. Best ever. Glad you liked the story. I am now off to make popcorn :)

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jungle_mag November 11 2008, 22:34:35 UTC
Heh, Grissom is a douche, eh?

My favorite is the "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!" sarcasm.

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chadini November 11 2008, 22:36:02 UTC
Sarcasm? Hmmm...what is that? What is your icon?

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zamboni12 November 12 2008, 10:02:45 UTC
Oh, I love it. You wonderfully delineated LH sensitivity.
I see the sadness wash across his face and I know that she is gone. That is the only reason that he would be here, he would not risk his relationship with her unless he thought it was already lost. This is so sad it almost hurts.

Great job.

~ Heike

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chadini November 12 2008, 21:13:34 UTC
Thanks...I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It was nice to try and write from LH's perspective.

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hunterseaker November 12 2008, 23:43:50 UTC
I really like this!
It's soooooooo good. And you captured LH in a very real way, what she would say and what she think.

Great job!

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chadini November 15 2008, 03:17:26 UTC
Thanks! I thought I would give LH a whirl and see how it went. It was interesting to write from her perspective.

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