[fic] First Love - Chapter 3

[chaerin_ah]

Title: First Love
Pairing: Yunho / Jaejoong
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Disclaimer: I don't own Yunho or Jaejoong. they belong to each other.
Summary: Kim Jaejoong, the school's nerdy nobody falls in love with Jung Yunho, the campus' hearthrob, star player and a certified playboy. Will Jaejoong's love be returned or it will stay as an albeit

Comments

[mushroomkey]

Yunho is so obvious with his jealousy while Jaejoong is very clueless with his friend's actions..

YooSuMin are really the best!
Oh i think the pace of this lovely story is alright.. you're not rushing it.. ^^

[chaerin_ah]

wow, you're fast!^^,
let's cheer for yoosumin! fighting!~
thank you for thinking that my story is lovely (i'm flattered) and also for reading~

[headachegirl]

FIRST!!!!.........Yay~ I watched the m0vie n I cried whe the girl had been rejected then slip off to the pool T.T.......I hope this fic not TOO ANGST *bow*......update fast pwease...

[chaerin_ah]

i started crying at that part and i was literally bawling out when the part where shone was scanning his scrap book was being played.
i don't really have that much talent when it comes to writing angst so this is a less angst fic^^,
and i'll try to update soon~
thanks for reading^^,

[love_terrain]

ohh! who's the guy with the red bike? is that possibly the upcoming person that will hinder YunJae's relationship?
i have watched the movie so many times before and i really like the part in the pool >.<
the ending was awesome but it was such a tease! i want a proper ending for that movie. Actually I was also planning to write a YunJae version of that movie but it seems you beat me to it. =PP
Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more!!! =))

[chaerin_ah]

he might be or might be not~
i can't stop watching the movie too.
i also wanted a proper ending for the movie so maybe i'll end this story the way i like the movie to end. hehe^^,
thank you~ i'll update soon^^,
and thank you for reading~

[trish3815]

I love what they are doing... Oh, Yunho is getting so jealous..
Junsu is getting Yoochun to help and Changmin is just too cute hanging on Jae.. Yunho was the one on the bike... this is getting better.. thanks for updating.. more more..

[chaerin_ah]

i sort of like a 'jae'lous yunho. hahaha~ can't help it^^,
uh, you're welcome? hehe.
i'll try to update soon. thanks for reading~

[kazemomo]

lol. junsu got to the bus problem first. :D

if i was jae, i would be suspicius and know something was up.

1) "he get in" = 'he got in'
2) concersation = conversation
3) "knowWhy" = 'know. Why'
4) "'Youngwoon-ah!' and he immediately left his work and run outside to see his uncle he ran up to him and hug him. His Uncle Youngwoon is also working with his dad in a hotel in Paris as one of the cooks." = ''Youngwoon-ah!' He immediately left his work and ran outside to see his uncle. He ran up to him and hug him.'

ooh. a rival. and just at the right time too. i can't wait to know the biker's identity!!!

[chaerin_ah]

thanks for reading~