Series: Kiddy Grade Rating: G Word Count: 210 Note: I had to cut down the first line a bit, because it just doesn't work when you're writing about two female characters. This is totally late, by the way. >_> But it's something.
This is gorgeous language (I know nothing about the series); your last line is especially lovely. I also like the line, if there's one thing she's good at, it's ineffectual fury.
I would claim, but this weekend is sort of flailingly busy, so if it no one's taken it by Monday. I'm coming back!
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I would claim, but this weekend is sort of flailingly busy, so if it no one's taken it by Monday. I'm coming back!
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And thank you very much. I thought the last line was a little long and would be hard to work with, but whatever works for you...
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