[Drabble] Silenced

[chained_akame]

Title: Silenced
Fandom: HIGH & LOW
Pairing: Murayama Yoshiki/Cobra
Genre: angst
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot
Summary: It's only real until it's over.

Comments

[su_jin]

😭😭😭 Your characterization is so fucking perfect! And your writing is so beautiful! You turn motion into poetry. *Weeps from the beauty of it*

"He understands, and that’s what hurts him the most. He understands, he’s afraid too, of what could happen if anyone knew, if the other teams knew, if people took advantage of that information. He understands why it’s all about pretending out there. But there’s nothing to pretend here, when they are together like that."

I love this paragraph. It really makes me think. What ifff one day they use Murayama as a hostage. And the others are yelling "Why Murayama and why now??!" to Cobra and he just softly says; "We've been dating since ___" and they realise just how long they've kept up the act to protect their teams. 😢

[chained_akame]

I'm only good when it comes to angst, though XD

You do realize that now you are making my head explode with ideas, maybe I should explore this option...though I'm pretty sure Cobra would die if he had to say the word "dating" for him and Murayama XD

But hostage doesn't sound too bad... *grin*

[su_jin]

See this is why my characterization is so bad XDD I'm curious how he would describe this kind of relationship they have?

*Kidnaps Murayama and puts him in your basement*

[stormy1990]

Nope sorry but this is not short enough to not yell at you, but don't worry it's the good kind of yelling, bc I REALLY REAYLL R.E.A.L.L.Y like this and the only bad yelling will be THAT I NEED MORE OF THEM!!!

Now I want to know what would happen if the others really knew about it, you know this needs a aequel, right? Maybe two, or trhee...you are always writing a lot of sequels after all :P

And the " if people took advantage of that information" part is what I am most interested in that's obvious, right???

Damn, those two are such good Angst material and you also take advantage of them like this :P (I totally approve of course)

[chained_akame]

OH YOU (maybe I am a little happy that you did yell at me, I missed it XD )

I guess now I have no choice but to think of a sequel, huh? I mean, there's a limit to how long they can keep it a secret from the others...and it'd be great if their enemies took some sort of advantage *innocent*

THOSE TWO ARE A DREAM COMBINATION, I JUST WISH WE HAD MORE OF THAT