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Open Spaces

Jul 28, 2013 01:39

Day of Challenge: Week one, Challenge 2/5
Title: Open Spaces
Pairing: ?/? (until the very end)
Rating: PG
Length: 499
Summary/Warnings: Challenge #12 for xoxocamp (write without using any names)
( A small beeping on his right wrist alerted him to the fact that the one he was waiting for was exactly two hours late. )

Comments 2

gokulex59 July 28 2013, 10:16:01 UTC

This is nice. I enjoyed reading it, and you'd think mentioning their names at the end would be a misuse of the prompt but guess what, it's not; in fact, it's a good way to end it, even though it was very obvious who the characters were with the unique descriptions - but that's what was attempted anyways. I like the couple and I like this drabble.

hunhamburger July 29 2013, 00:43:25 UTC

Thank you so much :D Yeah, I was worried if using the names at the end would've broken the rules or something ><" I'm glad the descriptions made it clear earlier on of who the characters were! That was my intent, I'm glad it worked! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a nice comment!