A Drop In The Ocean

[hunhamburger]

Challenge: week two, challenge one
Title: A Drop In The Ocean
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Rating: G
Length: 743
Genre: romance, fluff
Summary/Warnings: Two strangers brought together through music. Challenge #23 (write a pairing you've never written before)

Comments

[kfangirl4]

WOW *melting into a romantic puddle*

[hunhamburger]

Hehe :3 thanks for reading and commenting!

[gokulex59]

Nope nope nope I don't like romance I don't like fluff okay I am a tomboy and I don't find fall in love as soon as you met through some song shit realistic I just- dammit. *melts and floods out of the bus as a pink romantic fluid*

[hunhamburger]

ahahha aweh! :D Mission accomplished! I'm not typically one for unrealistic romantic things either but I had to write this! It's kinda based on true events, but instead of it being a stranger it was me and my friend who were playing the piano together and then some old man said that to us! xD

[gokulex59]

Hahahahahahahaha I laughed at this out loud. I hear the wedding bells ringing ding ding.

[hunhamburger]

Oh my god xD ahahah! He's actually asked me out a couple of times before xD but I said no :S

[anonymous]

this was really powerful! but there was something off to me about it, i'm not sure what.
there were a few grammar problems (missing comma splices) and missing words, i think.. i don't know

[hunhamburger]

Thanks for letting me know! I'll work on some of those grammar issues >< If you ever figure out what was off about the drabble please let me know!