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Fic: All the Wild Horses

Feb 07, 2011 23:18

Title: All the Wild Horses
Pairing: Adam/Lawrence
Rating: PG
Warning: AU. Angst.
Word Count: 760
A/N: A rough sketch of a drabble. No beta.
Summary: AU. Lawrence and Adam meet in different, but just as scarring conditions.

( It’s not the kid’s fault; this is what Lawrence tells himself. )

type: fic, rating: pg, pairing: adam/lawrence, character: adam, character: lawrence

Comments 12

preferthemoss February 7 2011, 23:25:05 UTC

You just broke my heart in the best possible way. I adore this.

i_am_negotiable February 8 2011, 12:19:55 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I feel like writers rarely take Lawrence's POV in chainshipping? Or is that just me?

preferthemoss February 8 2011, 13:48:35 UTC

No, it is true. It does happen, just not terribly often. I feel like maybe Adam's less threatening to try to get into the headspace of, being that most people could relate to him more easily than they could to a man like Doctor Gordon. Or maybe that's just my thoughts, and it's actually nothing like that at all, lol.

i_am_negotiable February 8 2011, 16:29:22 UTC

Not to mention I feel like most fangirls are more attracted to Leigh lol! Hence, he becomes the focus.

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minttown1 February 8 2011, 01:05:02 UTC

This is beautiful.

i_am_negotiable February 8 2011, 12:21:27 UTC

It's been awhile since I've chainshipped :P I'm pretty sure you were around back in the day when I still did though!

anonymous February 8 2011, 06:20:44 UTC

Jesus Christ, this was so beautiful. I was worried Adam wouldn't come back after he left the first time, but he did, so I'm happy. He and Lawrence are scarred by what happened to Diana, but they met, and they're bonded for life, just like the bathroom. I'm speechless by how amazing this was. You really should write more. I'd love to see the angst and hurt/comfort this would bring.

i_am_negotiable February 8 2011, 12:25:02 UTC

Thanks! I don't write a lot of fic anymore, and when I do it's short like this, but I'll possibly do more in the future.

anonymous March 31 2011, 22:14:29 UTC

That'd be awesome! I'd love to read it! <3

plentysaid February 13 2011, 14:27:09 UTC

This was absolutely heart-breaking, and amazing.
I love how you have written it from Lawrence's perspective, and how even though they didn't have the bathroom to bond them, a tragedy can still bring them together.
Amazing. <3

i_am_negotiable February 14 2011, 20:53:57 UTC

Thanks! I haven't seen a lot of Saw AUs around, but why not? I started what could quite possibly be the most random/worst crossover ever...Saw/Never Let Me Go. WEIRD, RIGHT? But you can see it...Lawrence as the doctor, Adam as the donor. Tell me it's not obvious (if you've read the book or seen the movie)!