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liroa15 December 1 2013, 02:51:18 UTC
hahaha. Of course, Nico is the mastermind. This is me, after all. ;)

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caaare November 30 2013, 15:29:25 UTC
I was trying to figure out what the secret talent was, and it seemed like it was Juanqui's deviousness but everyone knows that. So i am glad you clarified. :) cute little story!

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liroa15 December 1 2013, 01:57:58 UTC
lol. Yeah, I know, but I liked David and Tommy as huge failboats too much to try and rewrite it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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krisherdown December 1 2013, 20:26:52 UTC
I have to agree that the talent is definitely David and Tommy's obliviousness. :) Nice work, Nico (with an assist from his pseudocoach Juanqui). :)

Well done.

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polkad0tting December 3 2013, 06:34:51 UTC
I laughed pretty hard at Juanqui telling Tommy that as the owner of the tournament he had better things to do than worry about Tommy's practice schedule. :D Oh Juanqui. <3

"Loser buys dinner?" Tommy suggests when they're both near the net.

"You're on," David agrees immediately.

Tommy grins at him then. "You might change your mind when I order the biggest steak on the menu tonight."

"Well, I won't be paying the bill, so you can order whatever you like," David returns, tone snotty.

:DDD I love banter, and you do it so well. <3

Nico and Feli are already there when he arrives. Feli's standing a little to the side, the look on his face a cross between disdainful and terrified. Nico, on the other hand, is already down on his knees, listening to one child narrate a story that involves a lot of racquet waving on both their parts.Love love love Nico being written as really good with kids. He seems to adore his toddler relatives, and the bit in that RtRG video where he confessed that what he really wanted in life was a family stole all ( ... )

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