lacking perfection

Sep 09, 2003 17:17

lacking perfection
by: ivy quihuistoday my smile may be bright ( Read more... )

public, poetry

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zak417 September 9 2003, 18:19:01 UTC
I did not know you felt that way about me... Awww.. I am touched... hehehehe....

Good work cob..

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chairmenmeow47 September 9 2003, 18:29:58 UTC
HA HA HA

thanks, zak. words from a PUBLISHED writer always help ;-)

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zak417 September 9 2003, 19:17:15 UTC
Blah to published writters....

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fayemoon September 9 2003, 19:58:02 UTC
you're so beautiful. :)

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chairmenmeow47 September 9 2003, 21:25:48 UTC
u r ;-)

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shiloh187 September 9 2003, 21:35:28 UTC
beautiful poem. very insightful while still ominous in its own way. i like it, i need to write more again. you remind me.

your writing is always beautiful when i see it.

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chairmenmeow47 September 9 2003, 21:44:29 UTC
thank you! :-) i don't write that often, just when something comes to mind. hope to see something from you in the future!

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