April Flowers Prompt #27, Quatrain

[mrstater]

Title: Quatrain
Author: mrstater
Rating & Warnings: rated B for Bad, Very Very Bad Poetry
Characters/ Pairing: Palli, Caz/Betriz
Prompt: #27, poetry
Format & Word Count: drabble, 258 words
Summary: Cazaril's body is on the mend, but the same cannot be said for his poetry skills.

Comments

[bookish_brownie]

Cute! I actually sort of like this poem of Caz's. I really like his seeming to be a little bit unhinged here, and he does make a good point about her wanting him to express his love.

[mrstater]

Hee! I'm glad you liked the bad poem; it was fun to write, as was unhinged!Caz. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

[gilpin25]

LOL! I shall forever imagine from now on that this was indeed the ode to Betriz's nose. My favourite part has got to be Cazaril digging a hole for himself by using 'long' and then rather deliriously declaring his equally long love for her nose! (Which will probably save his bacon, long term, along with Palli's tact?;))

[mrstater]

Hee! It's a little worrying that I write good bad poetry--better than the poetry I mean to be good, anyway, LOL. So pleased you liked and will be pasting it into your book. ;) Thanks for reading and commenting!

[shimotsuki]

Hee! This is a perfect missing moment -- and no wonder Betriz was confused about the whole thing, heh. I love Caz in his joy and giddiness here, and then poor Palli trying so hard to handle damage control.

[mrstater]

Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this and I'm glad you enjoyed it! (Had to find some outlet for my bad poetry skillz. ;))