i commented on this TWO AND A HALF YEARS AGO. omg. now i'm rereading and i'm in awe AGAIN.
Loss here, gain there, Antarctica and Africa and a blizzard of cows between them, and they stood before each other like they'd never stepped away. THIS.
also this. She's too near to be able to look him in the eye, and he's nosing at her hair where it's tucked behind her ear. Breathless, she can't believe how close she came to losing him, how much merely seeing and hearing him has become who she is. He rubs his jaw along hers deliberately, with his late afternoon shadow. They don't kiss. oh god, you. so sweet and amazing.
please, please, i am being serious here, please do more. i will bother you constantly until you do.
oh frey, really, truly, seriously, you MUST write more. i mean, hell. this is so totally my kinda feel, you know? both the style and the themes you choose. amazing. and as someone said in the comment somewhere here, the fandom needs more quality writers. like you. pllleeeease, you must do mooooore. at least post snippeeeets
This story is amazing, but way too short. I want more! Seriously, this is beautiful. There are so many remarkable parts, but this part is my favorite: "Loss here, gain there, Antarctica and Africa and a blizzard of cows between them, and they stood before each other like they'd never stepped away." It so perfectly captures the essence of TSE:AF and how their relationship takes such an incredible turn with that episode. I'd love to read more of your XF fics. Where can I find them? :)
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reduced me to monomorphemic words.
SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE
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now i'm rereading and i'm in awe AGAIN.
Loss here, gain there, Antarctica and Africa and a blizzard of cows between them, and they stood before each other like they'd never stepped away.
THIS.
also this.
She's too near to be able to look him in the eye, and he's nosing at her hair where it's tucked behind her ear. Breathless, she can't believe how close she came to losing him, how much merely seeing and hearing him has become who she is. He rubs his jaw along hers deliberately, with his late afternoon shadow. They don't kiss.
oh god, you. so sweet and amazing.
please, please, i am being serious here, please do more.
i will bother you constantly until you do.
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I very occasionally get the urge to add more to an ongoing story, and it's slowgoing. but your encouragement is very sweet :)
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i mean, hell. this is so totally my kinda feel, you know? both the style and the themes you choose. amazing. and as someone said in the comment somewhere here, the fandom needs more quality writers. like you. pllleeeease, you must do mooooore.
at least post snippeeeets
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