Unkept (Chapter Three)

[chalkyhands]

Title: Unkept (Chapter Three)
Author: chalkyhands
Rating: R (later chapters)
Pairing(s)/Character(s): Buffy/Spike
Disclaimer: The show belongs to Joss and his associates.
Warnings: Later chapters will contain graphic torture. Also, claiming (eventually).
Notes: Set in some approximation of Ats S5. The next chapter will be posted on 11/21.
Summary:

Comments

[spygrrl76]

Dawn rocks! I love that you had Dawn live up to her potential in this story. So proud of her cleverness in finding out the truth about Spike and getting solid evidence for Buffy. :)

The whole auction scene was great. Very cool how Dawn played off Dominic - she seemed like a real spy. My only question is on the bidding numbers - I would think at the aution, after 1 million, it would go to 1.1 million, 1.2, etc, not 1,000,100. It usually would go up by $100,000 not $100 (but maybe that is what you meant).

Looking forward to Team Buffy & Dawn to the rescue! :)

[weallfadeaway]

I love Dawn. MORE PLEASE and soon!