[ Entry 21 ] Marry Me Or I Shoot You?

[exobubz]

Title: Marry Me or I'll Shoot you?

Genre: romance, action, drama

Word Count: 9362

Warnings: Bromance, bad words, gang, male pregnancy

Prompt: "Marry me!" "No way!" "Marry me or I’ll shoot you?"

Comments

[ellysa_88]

You have a different style of writing. You have point of views. I love it.
But I was confused when you call baekhyun a girl and 'her' but it's alright. He looks like a girl anyway xD kidding!
Rate: 98/100
I thought baek died at the end. ;;;;;;;;
I love the plot! I really really love the plot. Two thumbs up! :D
I love you author! :*

[unicorn_fairygk]

Woah! Is this the last one? I can say 'save the best for last'. If I will rate this like @ellysa_88 did, it would be 100/100
'That girl' and 'her' confused me too but it's understandable.
Btw, I love the cucumber scene.
And
"I love you"
"I love me too"
Hahahahahaha FTW!
Wishing that you will win this competition!
Author, I want you to do a story like this bit longer. Same plot. Jebal? Hihihi.

[miss_lollipoop]

Male pregnancy.... I cannot XD
/imagines that baekhyun is pregnant/ pfft XDDD

"Letting go of someone is like getting a loose tooth pulled out, it’s painful but it needs to be done, because if you let it stay there, it will just hurt you even more."
^ I like this quotation, will repost this

I almost died at these
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BYUN CHANYEOL

MAY YOU REST IN PEACE
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BYUN BAEKHYUN

MAY YOU REST IN PEACE
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And when Chanyeol didn't really had his amnesia. -.- Asdfghjkl
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And when 'grandpa cyfer is lucifer' and when he reveals their real name.
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When baek thoughts micha is Chanyeol's other girl XD

P.s. I love Sulli but I hate her here XDD

It's just so great.

You have 100/100 originality,the plot is great, everything is great.

[itskiara]

nice gang name. Sasaengs hahhaahahhaah.

Can I copy your writing style? And I want it's longer version pls?
sorry for being demanding

i like the plot, the ending, the revelations, all of it.

I cried an ocean. TTTTTTTT Lol

I'm literally crying when chanyeol died asdfghjkl
and suddenly, baek saw chanyeol. I effin' love that part

The ending is just... WOW.

Why are they rating??
oh well,
97 or 98/100

huehuehue....

[tinayeol]

I like it because the characters is like talking to you when they are on their pov.
Your style in writing is more on talking not descriptions, and I like it.

I like the surname exchange. When I read 'Byun Chanyeol' and 'Park Baekhyun'... I was like... what the hell?!
Then when baekhyun's real father revealed it I was like... oh........
I like cyfer-lucifer name.

I agree with the others, I want the longer version of this.