[ fic ] free to be you & me

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B1A4 | baro/cnu | NC-17 | 1,006 w

it's naked time. uh, continued from this sort of.
brb, melting into the ground.

Comments

[fourcoldpaws]

!!! (i'm not stalking you i swear)

!!!!!!!!! why aren't you writing more porn when you're clearly so good at it like i'm totally serious this is my fav kind of porn. and you write it so well??? clever wording, the decscription of their uncomplicated relationship-or-whatever it is, ignorance being bliss (lmao) and trying not to grin too obviously when Jinyoung sits down on the same spot (sobbing) not to mention SITTING ON A TOWEL SO NOT TO BALL ALL OVER THE PLACE which i simultaneously wtf-ed at and loved bec i'm such a sucker for uncomfortably realistic details like that (and how thoughtful of them). and then the actual porn hgnnn and you put in so many details that make me literally claw at my face and like curl my fingers in the air bec of how much they please me, like pressing kisses down the side of Sunwoo’s nose (hgnnnn) (i stan that nose) and their cocks bumping together (HGNNNNN) and asking if it's ok and if no one else sees, it didn't happen or sucking on his own fingers in the shower and imagining that they're sunwoo's (

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sakdjfskj i'm glad you liked it /)////(\ especially since the parts you picked out were parts that i specifically reworded and rewrote to fit them in (except the towel part, that was just the first thing i thought of when i started writing this). and i'm pretty sure everything i write turns into sap by default, i could write about porn stars and serial killers and it'd end up sappy.

i didn't think you were stalking me at all! it did surprise me a bit to get a comment since i didn't crosspost this yet but in a good way! just...thank you so much for the comment /)////(\

[fourcoldpaws]

lmao i would also have thought abt the towel thing first. there is nothing wrong with the sap tho, you write it well n___n

ah yeah no i was just swinging by to read one of your other fics but saw this instead ahh you really should crosspost it tho!

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my porn tends to write itself around a single awkward detail and go from there, i have no other method of porn writing.

i'm trying to finish my other sort of porn and maybe a few more prompts before i post so that i don't flood the comm >> or waiting for someone else to post to the comm so i don't post back to back, whichever comes first orz