buwah

Sep 19, 2007 19:04

Just something short because I felt righteous flames of fury rise up in me over something I saw in Racewing's eljay, and just for five short minutes my shriveled husk of a soul wanted to make something in direct opposition to that.

That something?

Yes, it's fanfic. Shut *up*. I know.

water meets rock )

writing, avatar, fanfic

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mads September 19 2007, 17:46:21 UTC
Neat! Althought I find the Appa cleaning thing a little odd; I suppose it's most relevant when they're in cities or inhabited places and stuff. Otherwise, as a flying creature, I'd guess Appa does it wherever. And the prospect of flying bison poop from the heavens should terrify even the most staunch bender. As a species, they were probably attacked on sight when they flew overland, restricting their habitats to over the oceans or virgin forests. Maybe that's why they're largely extinct.

Also, needs a last line from Sokka, if only it weren't so used already through the series:

"Well, you know what happens when water and earth mix," Sokka yawned, crawling into his sleeping bag. "You get mud."

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fandomgreen September 19 2007, 21:08:06 UTC
1) This is good. Really good, and opens the way to more, which is also good. But...

2) Damn your hide, Golden Boy. I was planning on doing this exact thing this weekend. I had an outline going and everything, and you beat me to one of the climaxes. -_-

If you see me on AIM somehow, message me. We may have to put a project together.

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theariman September 20 2007, 01:52:04 UTC
This is a pretty cool story, very well written and all. Though I have to admit, I haven't seen any of Avatar, sadly. I've heard really good things about it, though. Maybe I should invest in a DVD or two of the series...

Also: seeing fanfiction of good quality show up like this makes me want to get back in the swing of continuing my own stories.

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max_the_black September 20 2007, 02:19:15 UTC
DELICIOUS CAKE GET

I fucking told you you'd do fanfic again, just a reminder. ^_^

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