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Jul 30, 2005 04:23

Challenge fic. What's the challenge? Why, that would be telling...

Title: Variation
Fandom: YYH
Warning: Probable character death. Some language. Violence.
Status: Incomplete, but fully outlined. Likely to be about five parts long. Shortfic, so far. *crosses fingers*

( Something smoky and thick had curled through Kuwabara's mind like a drugged animal. )

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deathgod02 July 31 2005, 01:29:36 UTC

I really like this. Very intresting POV for the situation. I can't wait to read more!

nightwalker July 31 2005, 01:37:57 UTC

One day, just for you, I will write something in which no one dies. Promise. ^_^

kahn July 31 2005, 05:22:42 UTC

Holy crap, this is so cool. It's sad and full of tension. Not just melencholy but forshadowing.

Write. More. Dear. God.

I know where you live!

....also, you're visiting soon!

I love this line: Breathing would have been hard, if he'd thought to try it, but he didn't.

And I love the...um...lost the word. Compariason isn't it, but that's all I can think of right now. Comparison (contradiction?) of the normal day with Kuwabara's thoughts of Hiei being dead.

Write more. Write it!

nightwalker July 31 2005, 05:28:07 UTC

mm... yummy italics!

Thank you! Part One is almost done, I will post it as soon as it's been read over.

kahn July 31 2005, 05:29:34 UTC

...HTML is my BANE. Anyway... You'll post it to Reikai Writers, too. Yes? ::pouts cutely and uses the Kuwabara/Kurama icon::

nightwalker July 31 2005, 05:30:54 UTC

OH MY GOD! The Icon. The Icon around which my world revolves. The Icon which I love and adore above all others...

What? Were we talking about something?

*drools some more*

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