Distance (YYH - Kuwabara/Kurama - #4)

[chaoscentral]

Title: Distance
Author: nightwalker
Pairing: Kuwabara/Kurama
Fandom: YYH
Theme: #4 - our distance and that person
Disclaimer: Togashi owns them, not me.
Warning: Implied character death

Comments

[scheherezhad]

Mm. That packs a nice punch in a short space. It says a lot about how Kurama is feeling without actually talking about it directly. Very much his style to think about how the others are acting instead of letting his own feelings get out of hand.

[nightwalker]

Thanks for the feedback! That's the feeling I was going for, so I'm glad to hear I managed it.

[ecclecticdreams]

It's little things like this that makes me worship you guys here at reikaiwriters.

[nightwalker]

Eep! I am allergic to worship - well, unless you bring tithings of chocolate! *looks hopeful* Do you bring tithings of chocolate?

mm... angry, evil, penetrating Hiei. Poor thing looks so confused in that scene.

[ecclecticdreams]

Tithings of chocolate? That's a given! Would you prefer the offering in the form of baked goods, fondue, candy...

The icon was done by chrissy_sky. Brilliance.

[nightwalker]

Fondue!

Now I'm in a bad place involving Kurama, Kuwabara and warm melted chocoalte. Damn. So much for being productive today.

[perpetual_poet]

I have to agree with scheherezhad: considering a noticeable amount of Kurama's fights are actually in the point of view of his victim opponent...

And anything that even supposes Kurama/Kuwabara gets a B in my book. And when it involves the others and is as well-written as this, it gets an A+. =P

[nightwalker]

a noticeable amount of Kurama's fights are actually in the point of view of his victim opponent...

I really think Kurama would be the type to go on at length about how the sky looks like rain and completely neglect to mention that he's bleeding from a gaping whole in his stomach.

anything that even supposes Kurama/Kuwabara

I love this pairing, to the point where I will devour anything that features the two of them realistically, gen or slash. Okay, who am I kidding? I'll devour anything that has Kuwabara at all, but K/K is definitely icing on the cake.

It's sad, when your favorite character is Fangril Hate Target #1 for the entire fandom.

And speaking of K/K, you must have seen the last episode, right? I confess, the scene at the train station made me giggle like a fangirl.

[perpetual_poet]

I have the manga of it, but not the DVD yet... Unfortunately, I can't read the manga scene beyond them saying things like "A man? No way!" I seriously want it, though.

My favorite part of Kurama versus Shigure is his one-second Kuwabara remembrance, where they're in the typical happy-hug pose they seem to have whenever pictured together... I laughed hysterically because the Kurama-Hiei moment was in dark colors, and very cold, but Kurama and Kuwabara... ahahaha.

[kahn]

Gah. I hate you. You...you... The language is not elaborate, but the scene and the emotions and the details are complex. And it's so SAD. I demand the next one be happy. HAPPY!

Also, did I miss it? Where was the kiss?

[nightwalker]

There isn't one, and there shan't be. They'll have to deal with it. ^_^